鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer the two parts directly: say whether you like buying shoes and how often you buy them. Use the present simple for habits: “I like buying shoes” and “I buy them every two or three years.” Avoid unclear phrases such as “I didn’t have often wanting” and finish your explanation with a specific reason, such as durability or comfort. Use the plural form “shoes” and link the reason with “because.”

示例: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes, but I do not buy them very often. I usually buy a new pair every two or three years because my shoes are quite durable. I only replace them when they become uncomfortable or worn out.

建议: Use the present perfect for an experience: “No, I have never bought shoes online.” Then give one clear reason. Explain your concern naturally by saying that online colors may look different from the actual product, and avoid the incorrect expression “via scammer.” Use linking words such as “because” and “for example” to make the answer coherent.

示例: No, I have never bought shoes online. I prefer visiting a physical shop because I can try them on and check the color in person. For example, a pair advertised as bright red might look darker or more orange when it arrives.

建议: State the amount clearly with the correct preposition: “I usually spend around 3,000 Nepalese rupees on shoes.” Explain that you are willing to pay this amount for comfort. Use natural expressions such as “so that my feet do not hurt” instead of “the wear my feet feel not pain.” Avoid fillers and unnecessary repetition.

示例: I usually spend around 3,000 Nepalese rupees on a pair of shoes. I am willing to pay that much because comfortable shoes are important to me. They help prevent my feet from hurting when I walk for a long time.

建议: Give a clear preference first, then explain the exception. Use “comfortable shoes” without “a” because the noun is plural, and replace “stalis” and “fashionable suits” with “stylish” and “fashionable shoes.” Say “It depends on the situation,” not “my situations.” Add a specific example to make the comparison more effective.

示例: I generally prefer comfortable shoes because I often walk a lot during the day. However, if I am going to a party or a formal event, I choose stylish shoes instead. So, it depends on the situation, but comfort is usually more important to me.

× I really like to buying a shoes, but I didn't have often wanting to buy your shoes every month.

✓ I really like buying shoes, but I do not often want to buy new shoes.

After like, the -ing form can be used: like buying. The phrase do not often want correctly expresses a present habit, while did not have wanting is not grammatically appropriate here.

× I really like to buying a shoes, but I didn't have often wanting to buy your shoes every month.

✓ I really like buying shoes, but I do not often want to buy new shoes.

Shoes is a plural countable noun, so a cannot be used before it. Use shoes when speaking generally or a pair of shoes when referring to one pair. Also, your shoes incorrectly suggests that the shoes belong to the listener; new shoes is more appropriate.

× I'm literally buying uh, two to three years because my shoes is umm.

✓ I usually buy shoes every two or three years because my shoes are still usable.

The question asks about a usual frequency, so use the present simple, buy, rather than the present continuous, am buying. Use usually to describe a regular habit.

× I'm literally buying uh, two to three years because my shoes is umm.

✓ I usually buy shoes every two or three years because my shoes are still usable.

Shoes is plural, so it must take the plural verb are, not is. The correct structure is my shoes are still usable.

× No, I didn't ever bought the shoes in online because I think the online via scammer if I threw the colors like red in all and then they give like a cherry color not like red colors and I think that's.

✓ No, I have never bought shoes online because I think online sellers might be scammers. If I choose a color such as red, they might send me cherry-colored shoes instead of red ones.

After did not, use the base form buy, not the past participle bought. However, because the question asks whether you have ever had this experience, the present perfect form have never bought is more natural.

× No, I didn't ever bought the shoes in online because I think the online via scammer if I threw the colors like red in all and then they give like a cherry color not like red colors and I think that's.

✓ No, I have never bought shoes online because I think online sellers might be scammers. If I choose a color such as red, they might send me cherry-colored shoes instead of red ones.

The present perfect requires have or has plus a past participle. The correct form is have bought. Bought is the past participle of buy, but it must be used with have in this sentence.

× No, I didn't ever bought the shoes in online because I think the online via scammer if I threw the colors like red in all and then they give like a cherry color not like red colors and I think that's.

✓ No, I have never bought shoes online because I think online sellers might be scammers. If I choose a color such as red, they might send me cherry-colored shoes instead of red ones.

Use online without the preposition in: buy shoes online. Also, the natural preposition is instead of when contrasting the color received with the color ordered.

× No, I didn't ever bought the shoes in online because I think the online via scammer if I threw the colors like red in all and then they give like a cherry color not like red colors and I think that's.

✓ No, I have never bought shoes online because I think online sellers might be scammers. If I choose a color such as red, they might send me cherry-colored shoes instead of red ones.

Use might to express a possible result or risk: sellers might be scammers and they might send a different color. A modal verb is followed by the base form of the verb, as in might send.

× I literally like to spend the money for the three thousands of Nepali rupees to my shoes because I really like to uh, to the comfortable shoes and the wear my feet feel not pain.

✓ I usually spend about 3,000 Nepali rupees on shoes because I really like comfortable shoes, and I want to wear shoes that do not hurt my feet.

Use spend money on something, not spend money to something. The preposition on correctly connects the amount of money with the shoes.

× I literally like to spend the money for the three thousands of Nepali rupees to my shoes because I really like to uh, to the comfortable shoes and the wear my feet feel not pain.

✓ I usually spend about 3,000 Nepali rupees on shoes because I really like comfortable shoes, and I want to wear shoes that do not hurt my feet.

After a specific number, thousand remains singular: 3,000 Nepali rupees, not three thousands of Nepali rupees. Also, shoes is plural when speaking about shoes in general.

× I literally like to spend the money for the three thousands of Nepali rupees to my shoes because I really like to uh, to the comfortable shoes and the wear my feet feel not pain.

✓ I usually spend about 3,000 Nepali rupees on shoes because I really like comfortable shoes, and I want to wear shoes that do not hurt my feet.

Do not use the before shoes when discussing comfortable shoes in general. Use comfortable shoes without an article. The article the is used for a specific group of shoes already identified.

× I literally like to spend the money for the three thousands of Nepali rupees to my shoes because I really like to uh, to the comfortable shoes and the wear my feet feel not pain.

✓ I usually spend about 3,000 Nepali rupees on shoes because I really like comfortable shoes, and I want to wear shoes that do not hurt my feet.

The original sentence contains incomplete and incorrectly connected phrases, such as to the comfortable shoes and the wear my feet feel not pain. Use a complete clause with a subject and verb: I want to wear shoes that do not hurt my feet.

× I prefer a comfortable shoes because I really like a comfortable shoes, but if I'm going somewhere nice then I like to prefer uh, stalis and the fashionable suits. So it depends on the my situations.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because I really like comfortable shoes, but if I am going somewhere nice, I prefer stylish and fashionable shoes. So, it depends on my situation.

Do not use a before the plural noun shoes. Also, do not use the before the possessive determiner my. Say my situation, not the my situations.

× I prefer a comfortable shoes because I really like a comfortable shoes, but if I'm going somewhere nice then I like to prefer uh, stalis and the fashionable suits. So it depends on the my situations.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because I really like comfortable shoes, but if I am going somewhere nice, I prefer stylish and fashionable shoes. So, it depends on my situation.

Shoes is plural, so it cannot be preceded by a. In the final sentence, situation is being used as a general condition, so the singular form my situation is more natural.

× I prefer a comfortable shoes because I really like a comfortable shoes, but if I'm going somewhere nice then I like to prefer uh, stalis and the fashionable suits. So it depends on the my situations.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because I really like comfortable shoes, but if I am going somewhere nice, I prefer stylish and fashionable shoes. So, it depends on my situation.

Stylish is the correct adjective for describing shoes with an attractive style. Fashionable is also an adjective and can describe shoes. Use adjectives directly before the noun they describe.