鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Correct vocabulary (feet, comfortable, New Balance) and avoid repetitions. Keep answers to no more than 4–5 sentences.

示例: Not really. I find buying shoes difficult because my feet need a very comfortable fit. Therefore I usually choose New Balance since their models suit my feet well and provide good support. I typically buy a new pair about once a year.

建议: Give a direct yes/no, follow with a clear reason and one specific example. Use linking words (because, so, for example) and correct phrases (size not number; go to a shop). Keep sentences grammatical and concise.

示例: Yes. I usually buy shoes online because my size is often hard to find in local shops, so ordering online is more convenient. For example, I ordered a pair of trainers from the brand’s website last month and they fit perfectly.

建议: Answer directly with a price, then explain your reasoning using clear linking words. Fix grammar (I don’t worry much about price; if they are comfortable they’re worth it). Give a precise amount and keep to 2–3 sentences.

示例: I usually spend around €130 on a pair of shoes. I don’t worry too much about the price because if they are comfortable and support my feet well, I consider them good value.

建议: State your preference clearly, then give a specific reason and a short example. Use linking words (because, so, for example) and avoid filler phrases like “and that's it.” Keep it to 2–3 sentences for clarity.

示例: I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because I walk a lot while studying in Venice. For example, I often choose cushioned trainers so I can walk across the city without sore feet.

× I don't really like buying shoes.

✓ I don't really like buying shoes.

No change needed for this sentence; 'shoes' plural is correct for the general activity of buying footwear.

× I think it's a difficult task for me because my feets need a comfort one, a comfort by here of shoes.

✓ I think it's a difficult task for me because my feet need comfortable shoes.

'Feets' is incorrect pluralization; the correct plural of 'foot' is 'feet'. 'A comfort one' and 'a comfort by here of shoes' are ungrammatical; use the adjective 'comfortable' to describe 'shoes'. Suggestion: use 'my feet need comfortable shoes' for clear, natural phrasing.

× So usually I buy new balance because I think they are very comfortable.

✓ So usually I buy New Balance because I think they are very comfortable.

Tense is fine but 'New Balance' is a proper noun and should be capitalized. No grammatical change to tense; ensure brand names are written correctly.

× And often how often I think usually once a year?

✓ I think I usually buy them about once a year.

Original is a confused question/statement with incorrect word order. Rearranged to a clear declarative sentence matching the expected answer. Suggestion: place adverbs ('usually') before the main verb and use a clear time expression ('about once a year').

× Yes, usually I buy my shoes online because my number is usually unavailable so I find them online and I think it's easier than go on a shop and buy them.

✓ Yes, I usually buy my shoes online because my size is often unavailable in stores, so I find them online and I think it's easier than going to a shop to buy them.

Errors: 'my number' is incorrect word choice; 'size' is intended. 'Unavailable' refers to size in stores, so specify 'in stores'. Comparison structure 'easier than go on a shop' is incorrect; use the gerund 'going' after 'than' and the phrase 'going to a shop' or 'going into a shop'. Also change 'buy them' to clarify purpose. Suggestion: use 'going to a shop' and correct noun 'size'.

× I think I think I don't consider a lot the money for a pair of shoes because if I comfortable for my feet they worth the value so usually spent like one hundred and thirty euros that I think it's fair

✓ I don't spend a lot of money on a pair of shoes because if they are comfortable for my feet they are worth it, so I usually spend about one hundred and thirty euros, which I think is fair.

Multiple issues: redundant 'I think I think' removed. Word order and verb forms were incorrect: use 'I don't spend' not 'I don't consider a lot the money'. Need 'they are comfortable' (verb 'be'). 'They worth the value' is incorrect; use 'they are worth it' or 'they are worth the price'. 'Usually spent' should be 'I usually spend'. Use 'about' for approximate amounts and add punctuation for clarity. Suggestion: use subject + verb forms and proper phrase 'worth it'.

× I would rather prefer the comfortable shoes because to go to Venice where I study I usually need to walk a lot so I need a comfortable pair of shoes for that.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because, to go around Venice where I study, I usually have to walk a lot, so I need a comfortable pair of shoes for that.

'Would rather prefer' is redundant; use 'prefer' or 'would rather'. 'Need to walk a lot' is fine but after 'I usually' use 'have to' or 'need to' consistently; 'have to walk a lot' is more natural for obligation. Also 'to go to Venice' implies destination; 'to go around Venice' better conveys moving within the city. Suggestion: choose either 'prefer' or 'would rather' and use 'have to' for habitual obligation.

× And that's it.

✓ That's all.

Both are acceptable conversationally, but 'That's all' is slightly more natural and concise as a concluding remark. No major grammar error; this is a style suggestion.