鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Bạn đã không trả lời câu hỏi của giám khảo; câu trả lời là một câu hỏi ngược lại và có lỗi ngôn ngữ. Hãy bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No hoặc I enjoy...), sau đó nêu tần suất cụ thể. Sử dụng tối đa 3-4 câu, tránh hỏi lại giám khảo.

示例: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes. I usually buy new shoes about twice a year, mostly when my old ones wear out or when I need something for work. I prefer to shop at local stores so I can try them on before purchasing.

建议: Bạn đã lặp lại câu hỏi của giám khảo thay vì trả lời. Điều này cho thấy không hiểu hoặc không sẵn sàng trả lời. Trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No), rồi cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể: khi nào, ở đâu, tại sao hoặc trải nghiệm. Dùng liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'so' để nối ý.

示例: Yes, I have bought shoes online once last year because the style I wanted was not available in shops. I ordered from a well-known retailer and was pleased with the delivery time, although the fit was slightly different and I had to return them.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn là một phiên bản sai ngữ pháp của câu hỏi, không trả lời. Cần trả lời bằng một con số hoặc khoảng giá và bổ sung chi tiết về lý do. Dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng: topic sentence + supporting detail với từ nối như 'usually' hoặc 'on average'.

示例: On average, I spend about $50 to $80 on a pair of shoes. I prefer mid-priced shoes because they balance quality and affordability, and I usually wait for sales to get better value.

建议: Bạn lại lặp câu hỏi nhưng có lỗi từ vựng ('personal shoe' không phù hợp). Hãy trả lời trực tiếp nêu sự ưu tiên và giải thích lý do với ví dụ cụ thể. Sử dụng liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'although' để liên kết ý.

示例: I prefer comfortable shoes because I walk a lot during the day. Although fashionable shoes can look good for special occasions, I usually choose shoes with good support and cushioning so my feet don't hurt.

× Do you like racing? So how often?

✓ Yes, I like racing. How often do you race?

The original reply is fragmented and does not directly answer the examiner's question about buying shoes; it also places 'So' awkwardly. This is a sentence structure error because the response lacks a clear subject-verb structure and does not follow the question format. Suggestion: give a full answer (Yes/No) then form a proper question or statement. Use 'How often do you ...?' for frequency questions.

× Have you ever bought shoes online?

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online.

The student simply repeated the examiner's question rather than answering. This is a sentence structure error (response should be a complete sentence). Suggestion: Provide a full affirmative or negative answer using present perfect: 'Yes, I have ...' or 'No, I have not ...'.

× Have you ever bought shoes online?

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online.

Same as above: the student repeated the question instead of answering. Use present perfect to indicate life experience: 'I have bought ...'.

× Have made been money do you usually spend on shoe?

✓ How much money do you usually spend on shoes?

The original sentence is jumbled and ungrammatical. Words are in the wrong order and some words are incorrect ('Have made been money' is meaningless, 'shoe' should be plural to match general meaning). This is a sentence structure error. Suggestion: Use subject-auxiliary inversion for questions: 'How much money do you usually spend on shoes?'.

× Which do you prefer, personal shoe or comfortable shoes?

✓ Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?

The student replaced 'fashionable' with 'personal', which is incorrect in this context. This is an incorrect use of adjective: 'personal shoe' is not a natural collocation. Suggestion: Use the adjective that contrasts with 'comfortable' as in the examiner's question: 'fashionable shoes'. Also keep 'shoes' plural for general preferences.