鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 質問に直接答えた点は良いですが、発話の繰り返しや言い直しが多く、流暢さと正確さが下がっています。また、理由の説明はあるが詳細や具体例が不足しています。改善策：①言い直しを避けるために一度考えてから話す（短いポーズを取る）。②同じ内容を繰り返さず、理由を1〜2つの明確な文で述べる。③具体例（最近いつ買ったか、誰が選んだかの短いエピソード）を加える。

示例: I don't really enjoy buying shoes, so I rarely do it. When I was a child my mother always chose shoes for me, and even now my wife usually picks them, so I leave the shopping to her. For example, I haven't bought a pair in over a year because she handles our purchases.

建议: 理由は明確ですが、繰り返しや言い直しが多く、文法や語順の誤り（"buy it on online"など）があります。改善策：①基本的な語順と前置詞（buy online / on the internet）を確認する。②理由を一度で簡潔に述べ、補足に短い具体例を付ける。③接続詞（so / therefore / because）を正しく使って論理を明確にする。

示例: No, I've never bought shoes online because I'm not confident they will fit properly. Therefore, I prefer visiting physical shops where I can try different sizes and models before buying.

建议: 価格について答えている点は良いが、語の重複や曖昧な表現（"less than one ¥10,000"）があるため、明瞭さが欠けています。改善策：①金額は明確に示す（"less than ¥10,000"）。②重複を避け、理由（長く履く習慣）を簡潔に述べる。③場合によっては頻度や具体的な例（最後に買った靴の価格）を加える。

示例: I usually spend less than ¥10,000 on a pair of shoes because I prefer inexpensive ones. I also wear them until they are completely worn out, so I don't buy new shoes very often. For example, my last pair cost about ¥8,000 and lasted two years.

建议: 好みと理由を明確に述べている点は良いが、同じことの繰り返しや口語的すぎる表現（wanna）があります。改善策：①カジュアル表現を減らし、より自然な語彙（want to）を使う。②理由を整理して接続詞でつなぎ、具体例（仕事で長時間歩くためなど）を加える。③文を短くして流暢さを上げる。

示例: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because I'm not very interested in fashion and I need shoes that last at work. Since I wear the same pair almost every day, durability and comfort are more important than style.

× 'Personally, I don't like buying shoes 'cause when I was a child my mother used to buy buy them for me and now my wife is choosing them, choosing choose for me.'

✓ 'Personally, I don't like buying shoes because when I was a child my mother used to buy them for me and now my wife chooses them for me.'

'Subject-verb agreement and redundant words: The verb after a third-person singular subject (my wife) should be in the singular form chooses. Remove repeated words (buy buy, choosing choose) which are mistakes or hesitations; keep a single correct verb. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions (my wife chooses).'

× 'So basically I don't. I don't do that anymore.'

✓ 'So basically I don't. I don't do that anymore.'

'No grammatical error from the provided list: sentences are acceptable. No change needed.'

× 'I've never bought shoes online because if I buy it on online I don't know if it's I don't know if it if it's perfectly so I often go to physical shops to try them and pick them out.'

✓ 'I've never bought shoes online because if I buy them online I don't know if they will fit perfectly, so I often go to physical shops to try them and pick them out.'

'Plural and pronoun reference / tense consistency: Use plural pronouns them to refer to shoes (not it). Remove extra words and correct word order: "on online" is incorrect—use "online". Use future modal or simple present for fit: 'if they will fit' or 'if they fit' is appropriate; here 'will fit' clarifies uncertainty. Also remove repeated fragments and filler words. Suggestion: keep sentences concise and match pronouns to nouns.'

× 'Speaking Speaking of shoes, I choose cheaper shoes so I spend less than one ¥10,000 when I buy and also I keep keep wearing it until they are worn worn out.'

✓ 'Speaking of shoes, I choose cheaper shoes so I spend less than ¥10,000 when I buy them and I keep wearing them until they are worn out.'

'Singular and plural issue and pronoun reference: Use them to refer to shoes (plural) instead of it. Remove duplicated words (Speaking Speaking, keep keep, worn worn). The expression "less than ¥10,000" does not need the article "one". Suggestion: use consistent plural forms and avoid repetition.'

× 'So I don't think it it costs that much.'

✓ 'So I don't think it costs that much.'

'Redundant word and subject clarity: Remove the repeated it. The sentence uses present tense correctly to express a general opinion. Suggestion: avoid hesitation repetitions in speech and keep the subject and verb once.'

× 'I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because I'm not interested in fashion and also at workplace I keep wearing the same shoes, so it has to be, it has to last so long.'

✓ 'I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because I'm not interested in fashion and also at work I keep wearing the same shoes, so they have to last a long time.'

'Incorrect pronoun agreement and collocation: "at workplace" is unnatural; use "at work." The subject "shoes" is plural, so use plural pronoun they and plural verb have to/they have to. "Last so long" should be "last a long time." Suggestion: use natural collocations and match pronouns to their antecedents.'

× 'And also I don't wanna change, I don't wanna buy new one so often.'

✓ 'Also, I don't want to change; I don't want to buy a new one so often.'

'Singular/plural and article usage: If referring to a single item, use 'a new one.' However context implies 'buy new shoes' (plural) or 'a new pair'—better: "buy a new pair so often." Also replace colloquial wanna with want to in formal speech. Suggestion: choose the correct article and noun form (a new pair) and use standard vocabulary.'