鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be direct and clear. Start with a topic sentence that answers the question, then add one or two brief supporting details. Avoid grammar errors and confusing phrases (e.g., “two couple”, “take to put on different shoes rarely”). Use correct frequency expressions (e.g., always, often, sometimes, rarely) and correct verb forms.

示例: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes. I usually buy new shoes a few times a year because I like having different styles for work and weekends. I rarely buy many pairs at once, preferring to replace shoes as needed.

建议: Give a clear yes/no answer and then describe the experience with specific details and correct grammar. Mention the website, time, what went wrong, and the result. Use linking words (for example, however, so) to make the sequence clear.

示例: Yes, I bought shoes from an online store two years ago. I ordered size 39, but the shoes were too small when they arrived, so I had to return them. Because of that experience, I am more cautious when buying shoes online now.

建议: Answer directly with an amount and then explain the reason succinctly. Use correct vocabulary for currency and correct comparative/superlative forms (e.g., “more than”, “wear out”). Avoid unclear words like “mans”.

示例: I usually spend around 100 dollars on a pair of shoes because most good-quality shoes cost more than that. I avoid very cheap shoes since they tend to wear out quickly.

建议: Give a clear preference in the first sentence, then justify it with one or two specific reasons. Use correct word forms and avoid repetition. If you mention occasionally buying fashionable shoes, give a brief example or situation.

示例: I prefer comfortable shoes because I walk a lot and comfort helps prevent foot pain. However, I sometimes buy fashionable shoes for special occasions when I want to look more stylish.

× I like buying shoes a lot of and sometimes I purchase two couple because I like to take to put on different shoes rarely.

✓ I like buying shoes a lot, and sometimes I buy a couple because I like to wear different shoes.

The sentence has multiple structure and word-choice problems: 'a lot of and' is incorrect linking; 'purchase two couple' is wrong quantifier and word order; 'take to put on different shoes rarely' is awkward and misplaced adverb. Break into two clauses joined by and; use 'buy a couple' or 'buy a couple of pairs'; use 'wear' instead of 'put on' and place 'rarely' appropriately or omit if not intended. This fixes clarity and grammatical flow.

× Yeah, I have bought shoes in Trendiole two years ago but I didn't agree because I choose thirty nine size, but it came my country low.

✓ Yes, I bought shoes from Trendiole two years ago but they did not fit because I chose size thirty-nine and they arrived too small for my country.

Mixes present perfect 'have bought' with a specific past time 'two years ago' — use simple past 'bought'. 'I didn't agree' is incorrect; use 'they did not fit' or 'I was not satisfied'. 'I choose' should be past 'I chose'. 'it came my country low' is ungrammatical; clarify as 'they arrived too small for me' or 'too small for my feet'. Also use plural pronoun 'they' for shoes.

× Around one hundred mans because all of shoes are over than one hundred mans, but I think I never purchase low priced shoes because they tier quickly.

✓ Around one hundred manats because most shoes cost more than one hundred manats, but I prefer not to buy cheap shoes because they wear out quickly.

'Mans' is unclear — use the correct currency 'manats' if that is intended. 'All of shoes are over than' is incorrect: use 'most shoes cost more than'. 'Never purchase low priced shoes' is awkward; 'prefer not to buy cheap shoes' is better. 'Tier' is a misspelling; use 'wear out'. This corrects quantifier use, comparatives, and vocabulary.

× Actually I choose Port of Tambas specifically I choose comfortable shoes because I like coasy shoes and I think everybody should buys comfortable shoes which is which isn't uncomfortable shoes but sometimes I purchase fashionable shoes to

✓ Actually, I prefer practical shoes; specifically, I choose comfortable shoes because I like cozy footwear, and I think everybody should choose comfortable shoes rather than uncomfortable ones, but sometimes I buy fashionable shoes.

Multiple adjective/adverb and verb form errors: 'choose' should be present habit 'prefer' or 'I choose' with consistency; 'coasy' is misspelled 'cozy'; 'should buys' wrong verb form — use 'should choose' (modal + base verb). 'Which is which isn't uncomfortable shoes' is unclear and redundant; rephrase to 'rather than uncomfortable ones'. Ensure sentence is complete and ends properly. Also 'Port of Tambas' seems unclear — if it's a brand, keep as noun phrase 'practical shoes' if intended.