鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản (chia động từ, số nhiều/ít), từ vựng chính xác và câu chủ đề rõ ràng. Tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt lộn xộn; nên trả lời trực tiếp rồi cung cấp 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ với liên từ thích hợp (because/so/when). Ví dụ sửa lỗi: ‘I like buying shoes’ → ‘I like buying shoes, but I don’t buy them often because I only replace them when they are worn out.’

示例: I like buying shoes, but I don't buy them very often because I only replace them when my old ones are worn out.

建议: Sửa cấu trúc câu và dùng từ đúng (ví dụ: 'I haven't, because' hoặc 'Yes, I have' tùy thực tế). Trình bày ý chính trước, sau đó giải thích bằng chi tiết cụ thể và liên từ (because/so). Tránh từ sai (‘boss through life’) và dùng cụm từ chuẩn như ‘try them on’, ‘feel comfortable’, ‘return them easily’.

示例: I usually avoid buying shoes online because I prefer to try them on to make sure they feel comfortable, and it's easier to return them if they don't fit.

建议: Nên cho câu trả lời trực tiếp với con số rõ ràng và sau đó giải thích lý do bằng câu ngắn gọn, dùng từ vựng chính xác về giá cả và chất lượng. Sửa ngữ pháp và thứ tự từ, tránh dịch sát từ tiếng Việt. Ví dụ nêu số tiền và dùng cụm 'mid-range' hoặc 'good quality'.

示例: I usually spend about 1,000,000 VND on a pair of shoes because I prefer mid-range options that offer comfort and durability rather than very cheap ones.

建议: Trả lời rõ ràng về ưu tiên (ví dụ 'I prefer comfortable but also stylish') rồi giải thích bằng lý do cụ thể, dùng liên từ như 'because' và ví dụ minh họa ngắn gọn. Sửa từ vựng ('prefer', 'both', 'comfortable shoes', 'stylish') và cấu trúc câu để tránh lặp và câu lủng củng.

示例: I prefer comfortable shoes that are also stylish because I want to feel good all day and still look presentable when I go out.

× I like buy and sell, but I don't buy buy them very often.

✓ I like buying and selling, but I don't buy them very often.

The verb 'like' when followed by verbs generally requires the -ing form to indicate a general preference (gerund), so use 'buying' and 'selling'. Also the duplicated 'buy' is redundant; remove the extra 'buy'. Suggestion: Use 'I like buying and selling' to express hobbies or preferences.

× I usually buy new ones only when my old shoe are wore now.

✓ I usually buy new ones only when my old shoes are worn out.

Noun 'shoe' should be plural 'shoes' to match 'old' and refer to multiple items. The adjective 'wore' is the past form of 'wear' and is incorrect here; use the past participle 'worn' in the passive/participial adjective 'worn out' to mean unusable. Suggestion: Use plural nouns to match context and correct participle 'worn out' to describe condition.

× I have a boss through life because I prefer to try them on, treat the feet and comfort.

✓ I have always preferred to try them on because I prefer to check the fit and comfort.

The original 'I have a boss through life' is unclear and ungrammatical. Likely intended meaning is a lifelong preference; use 'I have always preferred' or simply 'I prefer'. Also 'treat the feet and comfort' is incorrect phrasing; use 'check the fit and comfort' to describe trying shoes. Suggestion: Use clear verbs like 'prefer' and collocations such as 'check the fit'.

× Also I like the option to explain or return them easily if they don't suit me.

✓ Also I like the option to exchange or return them easily if they don't suit me.

The verb 'explain' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'exchange' when referring to replacing purchased items. Pronoun 'them' is fine. Suggestion: Use 'exchange' for swapping items.

× Actually it's made about 1,000,000 Vietnam down on the pay of shoes because I refer buying better quality, more stylish so that last longer.

✓ Actually I spend about 1,000,000 Vietnamese dong on shoes because I prefer buying better quality, more stylish ones that last longer.

Several issues: 'it's made about' is wrong; use 'I spend about'. Currency name 'Vietnamese dong' is correct. 'down' and 'on the pay of' are incorrect prepositional phrases. 'I refer' should be 'I prefer'. Need plural 'ones' after 'stylish' and relative clause 'that last longer' requires plural verb 'last'. Suggestion: Use 'I spend' + amount + 'on shoes' and 'prefer buying better quality, more stylish ones that last longer'.

× For example, I often choose mid range rainfall comfort and durability rather than rather cheap one.

✓ For example, I often choose mid-range shoes for comfort and durability rather than rather cheap ones.

The phrase 'mid range rainfall' is nonsensical; likely 'mid-range shoes' is intended. Use hyphenated 'mid-range' as a compound adjective. 'Rather cheap one' should be plural 'cheap ones'. 'For comfort and durability' explains reasons and should follow 'choose'. Suggestion: Use clear compound adjectives ('mid-range') and match plural forms.

× I refer both fashionable shoe and comfortable because I want to have the best experience and also I want to look good when going outside.

✓ I prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes because I want to have the best experience and also look good when going out.

'I refer' is incorrect; use 'I prefer'. 'fashionable shoe and comfortable' must be parallel and plural: 'fashionable and comfortable shoes'. 'Going outside' is acceptable but 'going out' is more natural. Suggestion: Use parallel structures and correct verb 'prefer'.

× For example, actually buy a big rent to rent so we have the middle quality and style.

✓ For example, I usually buy at a mid-range price so we get medium quality and style.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear: 'buy a big rent to rent' is incorrect. Likely intended: buying at a mid-range price. Use 'mid-range price' and 'medium quality and style' for clarity. Ensure subject 'I' present and verb 'buy'. Suggestion: Express purchasing price level clearly: 'I usually buy at a mid-range price'.