鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make the response grammatically correct, more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating preference, then add one brief supporting detail (frequency or reason) using a linking word. Keep to 1–3 sentences and avoid repetition.

示例: Not really. I don’t enjoy buying shoes because I rarely need new pairs, so I only shop for shoes a couple of times a year.

建议: Make the answer more concise and fluent. Give a clear topic sentence (yes/no), then one or two specific reasons using linking words (for example, because/so). Avoid filler phrases like “you know” and overgeneralizations.

示例: Yes, I have. It was a good choice because online stores are convenient and I received the shoes within a week, so I don’t have to spend time visiting shops.

建议: Answer directly with a clearer estimate or frequency and one specific reason. Use linking words like because or since and avoid hesitations. Keep it to two sentences maximum.

示例: Not much — I usually spend around $30–50 on a pair because I prefer to save money for my studies and other priorities.

建议: Provide a direct topic sentence saying which you prefer, then support it with a clear reason using a linking word. Fix grammar (plural/singular, verb forms) and avoid repeating ideas.

示例: I prefer comfortable shoes because I walk a lot, so I need good support and cushioning rather than fashionable styles.

× I really I don't like buy a shoes because it's not necessary for me.

✓ I really don't like buying shoes because it's not necessary for me.

Error type: 8 (Verb + -ing form) and 1 (Singular and plural issue). The verb 'like' followed by another verb requires the -ing form (gerund): 'like buying'. Also 'a shoes' mixes singular article with a plural noun; use 'shoes' without 'a'. Suggestion: Use 'don't like buying shoes' or 'don't like to buy shoes'.

× Yes, I had that experience before and you know what I think about it that it was best choice in my life because you don't need to wait a long time.

✓ Yes, I have had that experience before, and you know what I think about it: it was the best choice in my life because you did not need to wait a long time.

Error type: 5 (Past tense issue) and 6 (Present tense issue). 'Had that experience before' is better as present perfect 'have had' to connect past experience to present. The clause 'you don't need to wait a long time' refers to the past purchase process, so use past tense 'you did not need' or keep present if describing a general fact ('you do not need'). Also missing article 'the best choice'. Suggestion: Use 'I have had that experience before' or 'it was the best choice' with appropriate tense consistency.

× Uh, all online shops now distribute to you shoes in just a week.

✓ Uh, all online shops now deliver shoes to you in just a week.

Error type: 6 (Present tense issue) and 26 (Sentence structure errors). 'Distribute to you shoes' has incorrect verb choice and word order; 'deliver shoes to you' is more natural. Tense 'now' with 'deliver' is fine. Suggestion: Use 'deliver shoes to you' or 'deliver your shoes within a week'.

× You know, not much, because I prefer to spend my money in other things, for example in my studying or something else.

✓ You know, not much, because I prefer to spend my money on other things, for example on my studies or something else.

Error type: 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions) and 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs). Use 'spend money on' not 'in'. Also 'my studying' is unidiomatic; 'my studies' or 'studying' is better. Suggestion: Use 'spend my money on other things, for example on my studies'.

× No, I don't spend a lot of money on my shoes.

✓ No, I don't spend a lot of money on shoes.

Error type: 1 (Singular and plural issue) and 22 (Article errors). 'My shoes' suggests specific owned shoes; general preference uses 'shoes' without 'my'. Either 'on shoes' or 'on my shoes' depending on meaning. Suggestion: Use 'on shoes' to express general spending.

× Usually I prefer to use a comfortable shoes because I walk a lot, so if I will, if I ever choose a fashion shoes, it's not me feel much good.

✓ Usually I prefer to wear comfortable shoes because I walk a lot, so if I ever chose fashionable shoes, I would not feel very good.

Error types: 8 (Verb + -ing form)/10 (Verb in the present participle form), 1 (Singular and plural issue), 2 (Third person singular issue) and 7 (Future tense issue). 'Prefer to use a comfortable shoes' should be 'prefer to wear comfortable shoes' or 'prefer comfortable shoes'; 'a' with plural 'shoes' is wrong. Conditional phrasing 'if I will, if I ever choose' is incorrect; use 'if I ever chose' or 'if I ever choose... I would not feel very good' to form the conditional. 'It's not me feel much good' is ungrammatical; use 'I would not feel very good' or 'I would not feel comfortable'. Suggestion: Use 'prefer to wear comfortable shoes' and a correct conditional: 'if I ever chose fashionable shoes, I would not feel comfortable'.