列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了主要意思，但语法和表达不够自然，尤其是“remember don't forget”部分重复且不符合英语习惯。建议简化表达，避免重复，并使用更自然的句型。

示例: Yes, I make a list when I shop because it helps me remember the things I need to buy.

建议: 回答基本清晰，但存在语法错误，如“can helps”应为“can help”。建议注意动词形式一致，同时可以用连接词使句子更流畅。

示例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me remember the tasks I haven't completed, and it is very useful.

建议: 回答中语法错误较明显，如“likes”应为“like”，且句子结构不够连贯。建议使用连接词并调整句子结构，使表达更自然。

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer a casual lifestyle and don't want to feel controlled by their lists.

建议: 回答较为自然且表达清晰，但可以通过添加连接词使句子更连贯，同时丰富细节。

示例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can quickly add or edit items whenever I need to, which is very convenient.

× Yes, I make a list when I shop because the list can help me remember don't forget the things I need to buy.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop because the list can help me remember not to forget the things I need to buy.

原句中 'remember don't forget' 结构不正确，动词 'remember' 后应接动词不定式 'not to forget'，表示记得不要忘记。应使用动词不定式形式来表达目的或意图。

× Yes, I make a list for my work because it can helps me remember the tasks I haven't completed.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work because it can help me remember the tasks I haven't completed.

主语 'it' 是第三人称单数，谓语动词 'help' 应该用原形 'help'，因为情态动词 'can' 后面跟动词原形，不能加 's'。

× Because some people likes the casual life, they don't want to be controlled by their lists.

✓ Because some people like the casual life, they don't want to be controlled by their lists.

主语 'some people' 是复数，谓语动词 'like' 不应加 's'。动词与主语在人称和数上必须一致。