列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，句子结构混乱，且有语法错误。建议简化句子，直接表达观点，并用连接词使内容连贯。

示例: I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I find shopping relaxing. If I have a list, I feel stressed to finish everything, which takes away the fun.

建议: 回答中语法和表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议用简单句表达观点，并用连接词说明原因。

示例: Sometimes I make a list for my work because it helps me organize tasks. However, I often don't finish the list, so I stopped making them to avoid feeling stressed.

建议: 回答表达了观点，但句子不够流畅，且有语法错误。建议使用更准确的词汇和连接词，使表达更自然。

示例: I think some people dislike making lists because it adds pressure. Lists create deadlines, which can be stressful, and not everyone can handle that pressure well.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和表达方式，使内容更连贯。

示例: I prefer making lists on paper because writing helps me remember better. When I use my phone, I have to check the list repeatedly, which is less effective for me.

× So for me, I think never, you know, at least 2.

✓ So for me, I think never, you know, at least twice.

这里的数字“2”应该用复数形式“twice”来表示次数，符合英语表达习惯。

× Shopping is a symbol of stress for me.

✓ Shopping is a source of stress for me.

“symbol”用法不当，应该用“source”表示“压力的来源”，更符合语境。

× Yeah, when I have a list, I need to finish everything there but my shopping.

✓ Yeah, when I have a list, I need to finish everything there except my shopping.

“but”用法错误，应使用“except”表示“除了”，使句意明确。

× So actually sometime I will get a list for my work because I think that will help me, but never they finished so after that I didn't do it again.

✓ So actually sometimes I will get a list for my work because I think that will help me, but they never finish it, so after that I didn't do it again.

“sometime”应为复数“sometimes”表示频率；“never they finished”语序错误，应为“they never finish it”。

× I think this day is a symbol of stress so I don't want to make me worried about my work.

✓ I think this day is a symbol of stress so I don't want to make myself worried about my work.

反身代词使用错误，应使用“myself”而非“me”。

× Oh I think they just like me.

✓ Oh I think they are just like me.

缺少系动词“are”，使句子完整。

× They don't want to put more stress to their self so they don't want to make a list.

✓ They don't want to put more stress on themselves so they don't want to make a list.

介词应为“on”，反身代词应为复数“themselves”。

× Sometimes a list only gives them a deadline.

✓ Sometimes a list only gives them a deadline.

此句无语法错误，无需修改。

× To push them here you need to finish it, but not everyone can.

✓ It pushes them to finish it, but not everyone can.

句子结构不清晰，改为“It pushes them to finish it”更通顺。

× Umm, to be honest, I prefer to use paper.

✓ Umm, to be honest, I prefer to use paper.

此句无语法错误，无需修改。

× I write something on paper, I will find myself remember the list in my mind.

✓ I write something on paper, I find myself remembering the list in my mind.

“find myself remember”应改为“find myself remembering”，动词需用-ing形式。

× Then I can really apply them in my mind.

✓ Then I can really remember them in my mind.

“apply them in my mind”表达不当，应改为“remember them”。

× Not I need to say it again and again, but when you use the phone, I need to do that.

✓ I don't need to say it again and again, but when you use the phone, I need to do that.

句子缺少助动词“do”，应为“I don't need to”。