列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is unclear and does not address the question. Try to respond directly with a complete sentence and relevant content. For example, say whether you make a list when shopping and explain why or why not.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.

建议: Your answer repeats the question and does not provide any information. You should answer directly and add details about whether making lists helps you at work.

示例: Yes, I often make lists for my work, and they help me stay organised and complete tasks efficiently.

建议: Your answer is unclear and does not explain why some people dislike making lists. Try to give a clear opinion with reasons and examples, using linking words to connect ideas.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they find them restrictive and prefer to be spontaneous when managing their tasks.

建议: Your answer repeats the question and does not provide your preference. You should state your choice clearly and explain why, using linking words to support your opinion.

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I can easily edit or add items whenever I need to.

× Do you make a list when you saw?

✓ Do you make a list when you shop?

The verb 'saw' is the past tense of 'see' and does not fit the context of shopping. The question is about a habitual action, so the present tense 'shop' should be used instead.

× Some people like making list.

✓ Some people like making lists.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making multiple lists, not just one.

× Verdant same.

✓ I think it's the same.

'Verdant same' is not a correct phrase in English. The student likely intended to express agreement or similarity, so a proper sentence like 'I think it's the same' is appropriate.

× Do you prefer to make a list on paper on your phone?

✓ Do you prefer to make a list on paper or on your phone?

The sentence lacks the conjunction 'or' to present a choice between two options. Adding 'or' clarifies the question.