列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to form complete sentences and avoid repetition. Also, provide a clear reason why making a list is helpful, using linking words to connect your ideas.

示例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need to buy and prevents me from forgetting important items.

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and contains fragmented sentences. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then explain your opinion with supporting details using linking words.

示例: No, I don't usually make lists for my work because I find them ineffective. I have tried it before, but it didn't help me stay organised or improve my productivity.

建议: Your answer is unclear and difficult to understand. Focus on giving a direct response with clear reasons, using complete sentences and linking words to explain your ideas logically.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to remember things naturally, or they find lists inconvenient and time-consuming to create.

建议: Your answer is clear, well-structured, and uses appropriate linking words. To improve, try to include a wider range of vocabulary and perhaps a brief comparison to paper lists for more depth.

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I always have it with me. Unlike paper lists, which I might forget, my phone helps me stay organised. Additionally, typing is faster and more efficient, saving me time.

× I used to have a list. For shopping.

✓ I used to have a list for shopping.

The sentence 'For shopping.' is a sentence fragment lacking a verb and subject, which makes it incomplete. Combining it with the previous sentence forms a complete and clear sentence.

× A list really helpful for me because I can forget why I need to shop.

✓ A list is really helpful for me because I can forget why I need to shop.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' to link the subject 'A list' with the adjective 'helpful'. Including 'is' corrects the sentence structure.

× Is not working.

✓ It is not working.

The sentence is missing the subject 'It'. Every sentence requires a subject and a verb to be complete.

× I try it.

✓ I tried it.

The context is about a past action, so the verb should be in the past tense 'tried' instead of the present tense 'try'.

× Is not helpful exactly at the work.

✓ It is not exactly helpful at work.

The sentence is missing the subject 'It' and the phrase 'at the work' is incorrect; 'at work' is the correct expression. Also, 'exactly' should be placed before 'helpful' for clarity.

× I guess it prefers and depends on there.

✓ I guess it depends on the person.

The pronoun 'there' is incorrectly used; 'the person' or 'someone' is appropriate here. Also, 'prefers' is incorrectly used without an object; the sentence is better simplified to 'depends on the person'.

× Flavor, so it's there conveniently.

✓ It depends on their preference, so it's more convenient for them.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Flavor' is incorrect in this context; 'preference' is appropriate. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity.

× If there no if.

✓ If there is no list.

The phrase 'If there no if' is nonsensical and incomplete. It likely intends to say 'If there is no list' to make sense.

× If they. If they don't make a list.

✓ If they don't make a list.

The fragment 'If they.' is incomplete and should be removed to form a complete sentence.