唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答，再给出一个清晰原因和结果。注意发音和词汇：这里的“saying”应为“singing”，“same lessons”应为“singing lessons”。“I don’t like singing”后面不需要重复“taking a singing class”，可以用“Besides”连接第二个理由。句子较长，建议拆分，并使用“because”和“so”让逻辑更清楚。

示例: No, I don’t really like singing. I’ve never taken singing lessons because I find them stressful and time-consuming. I’d rather spend my free time listening to music.

建议: 回答内容相关，但语法错误较多，影响自然度。应使用“would rather listen ... than take ...”，而不是“than taking”；“sing lessons”应改为“singing lessons”；“listening to music makes me feel energetic and relaxed”中形容词要平行；“singing can be stressful”比“singing must make stressful”更自然。建议删去重复的“because”，并把最后两句合并为对比结构。

示例: No, I haven’t. I’ve never learned how to sing because I’d rather listen to upbeat songs than take singing lessons. Listening to music makes me feel energetic and relaxed, whereas singing can sometimes make me feel stressed and exhausted.

建议: 回答直接，原因和目的都比较清楚，结构也基本完整。可以减少“sing for them”和“would like to”的重复，并将“gratefulness”换成更自然的名词“gratitude”。“show my respect and gratitude”是固定且自然的搭配。

示例: I’d like to sing for my parents because they have always supported and encouraged me. It would be a meaningful way to show my love and gratitude, even though I’m not a very good singer.

建议: 观点明确，但论证不够自然且最后的“expertise”和“excitation”不符合语境。你可以承认唱歌能让一些人开心，再说明自己更喜欢听音乐，这样答案会更有层次。“Listening to music can make people feel happy and excited”是合适表达。建议使用“However”连接转折，并避免绝对化地说唱歌不能带来快乐。

示例: Yes, I think singing can make people happy, especially when they sing with friends. However, I personally prefer listening to music because it helps me relax and feel excited without making me feel nervous about my voice.

建议: 回答有明确观点、场景和原因，但“saying”应为“singing”，且“promote our relationship or friendship”不自然，可以改为“strengthen our friendship”或“bring us closer”。避免重复“I like listening”，并用“especially”引出具体场景。

示例: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy listening to my friends sing at karaoke because it helps me relax. More importantly, singing together gives us a chance to have fun and strengthens our friendship.

建议: 回答与问题相关，但“same class”应为“singing class”，“would rather listening”应改为“would rather listen”，“than learn”与前面的动词形式保持一致。可以避免重复前面答案中的理由，加入一个具体细节，例如时间有限或更喜欢在家听歌，使内容更具体。

示例: No, I haven’t taken a singing class. I’m usually quite busy, so I don’t want to spend several hours a week practising. Instead, I’d rather listen to upbeat music at home because it helps me relax.

× No, I don't like saying and also I haven't taken any same lessons before because I think saying or taking a saying class is very stressful and it takes a lot of time.

✓ No, I don't like singing, and I haven't taken any singing lessons before because I think singing or taking a singing class is very stressful and takes a lot of time.

“Singing lessons”表示“歌唱课”，这里需要用动名词singing修饰lessons。并列结构中，singing和taking都表示活动，形式应保持一致。最后一个it指代不清，因此改为省略主语，直接使用takes。

× No, I haven't learned how to sing because I think uh, I would rather uh, listen to some upbeat songs than uh, taking a sing lessons because uh, listen to music makes me feel energetic and relax.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing because I think I would rather listen to some upbeat songs than take singing lessons. Listening to music makes me feel energetic and relaxed.

would rather...than...后面通常接动词原形，所以taking应改为take。sing lessons应改为singing lessons。listen to music作主语时要使用动名词Listening；relaxed表示“感到放松的”，用于描述人的感受。

× But singing sometimes. Must make stressful and it it makes me feel exhausted.

✓ But singing can sometimes be stressful, and it makes me feel exhausted.

“Singing sometimes”不是完整句子，后面需要连接谓语。can be stressful表示“可能有压力”，形容词stressful前需要系动词be。两个it重复，应删除一个。

× But singing sometimes. Must make stressful and it it makes me feel exhausted.

✓ But singing can sometimes be stressful, and it makes me feel exhausted.

stressful是形容事物的形容词，前面需要使用be。sometimes可以放在情态动词can之后、主要动词之前，使副词位置更自然。

× Excitation.

✓ It can also bring people excitement.

“Excitation”单独出现，没有主语和谓语，因此是句子残片。需要补充完整的主语和谓语。表示“使人兴奋或带来兴奋感”时，使用bring people excitement更自然。

× Yes, I like listening to others saying, I like to, uh, listen to my friends saying, uh, at karaoke, of course, because uh, it can uh, help me relax and also it can, uh, promote our relationship or friendship.

✓ Yes, I like listening to others singing. I like to listen to my friends singing at karaoke, of course, because it can help me relax and also strengthen our relationship or friendship.

这里表示“听别人唱歌”，应使用singing，而不是saying。listen to后面可以接人，再接现在分词singing，表示听某人正在唱歌。

× No, I haven't taken a same class because I think uh, learning how to sing uh, will be stressful and it takes a lot of time for me. Uh, I would rather uh, listening to upbeat songs than uh, learn how to sing.

✓ No, I haven't taken a singing class because I think learning how to sing will be stressful and will take a lot of time for me. I would rather listen to upbeat songs than learn how to sing.

singing class中的singing是动名词，表示“歌唱课程”。would rather...than...两边都要使用动词原形，因此listening应改为listen，并与learn保持平行。由于前面使用will be，后面可以使用will take，使未来意义更加清楚。