唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer the question directly, then explain your reason using natural grammar. Use “I can’t sing very well” instead of “I can’t sing,” and say “I think it sounds terrible when people listen to me” rather than “it’s a very terrible if I say someone listen to me.” Avoid unnecessary repetition and keep the answer fluent and specific.

示例: To be honest, I don’t really like singing because I’m not very good at it. I often sing out of tune, so I feel embarrassed when other people hear me. I’d rather enjoy music by listening to it.

建议: Your answer is clear and well supported. Improve the grammar in “I’m more talented in and focus on” by saying “I’m more talented in science subjects and tend to focus on them.” You could also use “have focused” to connect your past and present experience more naturally.

示例: No, I’ve never learned how to sing. I’m more interested in science subjects, such as mathematics and chemistry, and I’ve always focused on them at school. As a result, I’ve never had much time or motivation to take singing lessons.

建议: You give a direct answer and a clear reason, but correct “who are supportive me” to “who support me” or “who are supportive.” Make the final sentence more natural by saying “I might sing for myself or a few close friends.” A specific situation would make the response more vivid.

示例: Since I’m not a confident singer, I wouldn’t want to perform in front of a large audience. I might sing for myself or for a few close friends who are supportive and won’t judge me. For example, I could sing casually with them at a small gathering.

建议: Your main idea and example are relevant, but improve the verb forms: “everyone relaxes,” “it reduces stress,” and “it lifts their mood.” Use a clearer linking phrase such as “For instance,” and avoid saying “sing songs together,” since people usually sing together or listen to songs together.

示例: Yes, I think singing can make people happy, although it depends on their personality. For instance, singing helps many people reduce stress and lift their mood after a difficult day. It can be especially enjoyable when people sing together with friends or listen to uplifting music.

建议: This is a well-developed answer with a clear reason and a relevant example. Make the tense consistent by changing “it’s helped me” to “it helps me” because you are describing a general benefit. You could also replace “let me connect” with the more natural “helps me connect.”

示例: Yes, absolutely. Although I’m not a good singer myself, I enjoy listening to other people sing because it helps me reduce stress and connect with my emotions. For example, after a busy day, I often listen to a calm song, which makes me feel relaxed and cheerful.

建议: The answer has a clear past and future idea, but several expressions need correction. Say “I haven’t had time to take any classes,” not “attain anything in classes”; use “when my workload is lighter,” not “my work lot”; and say “I hope so,” not “I’m hope so.” Add a linking word such as “However” before your future plan.

示例: No, I haven’t taken a singing class because I spend most of my time studying science subjects. I haven’t had enough time to join any extracurricular classes. However, when my workload becomes lighter, I’d like to take a singing course to improve my voice and become more confident.

× A simple reason is that I Can't Sing and I think it's a very terrible if I say someone listen to me.

✓ A simple reason is that I can't sing, and I think it would be terrible if someone listened to me.

The original sentence has an incomplete and incorrectly structured clause. The phrase a very terrible is incorrect because terrible is an adjective and needs a suitable complement, such as it would be terrible. In the conditional clause, listened is used after if to describe a hypothetical situation.

× I'm more talented in and focus on science subjects like mathematics or chemistry, so I spend my time studying those rather than taking singing lessons.

✓ I'm more talented in science subjects like mathematics and chemistry, and I focus on them, so I spend my time studying them rather than taking singing lessons.

The original sentence incorrectly coordinates more talented in and focus on without completing the first phrase. The ideas need to be expressed in parallel structures: be talented in something and focus on something.

× I might sing only for myself or for a few close friends who are supportive me.

✓ I might sing only for myself or for a few close friends who are supportive of me.

The adjective supportive is followed by the preposition of when describing the person receiving support. Therefore, supportive me should be supportive of me.

× Well I think it depends on the person because everyone relax in different ways.

✓ Well, I think it depends on the person because everyone relaxes in different ways.

Everyone is grammatically singular, so the present-tense verb must take the third-person singular form relaxes, not relax.

× It's reduce stress and push their mood, especially when they sing with friends or listen to uplifting songs together.

✓ It reduces stress and lifts their mood, especially when they sing with friends or listen to uplifting songs together.

The subject it is singular, so the verbs need the third-person singular ending: reduces and lifts. The expression lifts their mood is also the natural verb phrase for improving someone's mood.

× Yes, absolutely, and though I'm not good at singing myself, I really enjoy listening to other people sing because it's helped me reduce stress and let me connect with my emotions.

✓ Yes, absolutely. Although I'm not good at singing myself, I really enjoy listening to other people sing because it has helped me reduce stress and connect with my emotions.

The singular subject it requires has rather than have in the present perfect tense: it has helped. After helped me, the two verbs should be parallel: reduce and connect, not reduce and let me connect.

× No I haven't, I spend most of my time studying science subjects so I haven't had time to attain anything in classes.

✓ No, I haven't. I spend most of my time studying science subjects, so I haven't had time to attain anything in classes.

The original contains a comma splice because two independent clauses are joined only by a comma. Separate the first answer into its own sentence and use a comma before so when it connects the two remaining clauses.

× I'm hope so.

✓ I hope so.

Hope is a main verb, so it cannot follow am in this sentence. Use the simple present form I hope so to express the speaker's expectation.