唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, I like singing because music feels like a close friend to me. When I am happy, it makes me want to dance. Sometimes, I don't even need to understand the lyrics; just hearing the melody comforts me.

建议: Bạn cần sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp và từ vựng phù hợp. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, tránh lỗi sai và diễn đạt ý một cách mạch lạc. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và làm rõ quan điểm của bạn.

示例: I have never taken singing lessons, but I like humming along to music in my free time. For me, singing doesn't have to be perfect; it is more about expressing my feelings.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi sai. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể.

示例: I usually sing for myself first because it helps me relax. Then, I like to sing for my loved ones. I don't need a stage; just knowing they are listening is enough.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi sai. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể.

示例: I think singing can bring happiness because it connects people through shared emotions. A cheerful song can make even the worst day feel better.

× Yes, I really learn singing to me music is like a close friend.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy singing; to me, music is like a close friend.

The verb 'learn' is incorrectly used here; the correct verb to express liking an activity is 'enjoy' followed by the gerund form 'singing'. Also, the sentence needed punctuation for clarity.

× When time happy is make me want to dance, Anne Graham said is comfort me sometime I don't even need to understand all the lyric, just hearing the melody can came my hurt.

✓ When I am happy, music makes me want to dance. Anne Graham said it comforts me; sometimes I don't even need to understand all the lyrics, just hearing the melody can heal my heart.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains multiple errors including verb forms and sentence structure. Correcting the sentence structure and verb forms improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I have never taking for machining lessons but alike huming along to music when I have free time.

✓ I have never taken singing lessons but I like humming along to music when I have free time.

The verb 'taking' should be in the past participle form 'taken' after 'have never'. Also, 'machining' is incorrect; likely intended 'singing'. 'Alike' should be 'like'. These corrections fix verb tense and word choice errors.

× For me, singing doesn't have to be perfect, it just had too much how I feel.

✓ For me, singing doesn't have to be perfect; it just has to express how I feel.

The phrase 'had too much how I feel' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'has to express how I feel'. Also, 'doesn't have to be perfect' is correct present tense.

× I probably sing for myself first because sometimes I'm on my old touches audience.

✓ I probably sing for myself first because sometimes I'm my own audience.

The phrase 'I'm on my old touches audience' is unclear and incorrect. The corrected sentence uses a common expression 'I'm my own audience' to convey the intended meaning.

× Then I went to listen for the person I live.

✓ Then I listen to the person I love.

'Went to listen' is past tense but the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'listen' is better. Also, 'live' should be 'love'. The preposition 'to' is correct with 'listen'.

× No need for stage.

✓ No need for a stage.

The noun 'stage' requires an article 'a' to be grammatically correct in this context.

× Just knowing they're listen is enough.

✓ Just knowing they're listening is enough.

The verb 'listen' should be in the present participle form 'listening' after 'they're' (they are).

× I think it just singing not only health, belief, dread but also connect people through shared emotion or cheerful melody or family are song can make even the worst day feel better.

✓ I think singing not only promotes health, belief, and relieves dread but also connects people through shared emotions or cheerful melodies; family songs can even make the worst day feel better.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Correcting sentence structure, verb forms, and word choice improves clarity and grammatical correctness.