唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够自然，存在语法错误和表达不清的问题。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和语法错误。

示例: No, I don't like singing because I'm not very good at it and I feel shy when I sing. I prefer listening to music instead.

建议: 回答较长且有语法错误，建议简化句子结构，使用更准确的词汇，并注意时态和搭配。

示例: No, I haven't had professional singing lessons because I'm busy with my studies. However, I like to learn new songs by myself in my free time.

建议: 回答表达混乱，语法和词汇错误较多。建议先明确回答问题，再用简洁的句子表达原因和感情。

示例: I want to sing for my mom on Mother's Day because she works very hard every day, and I am very grateful to her.

建议: 回答不连贯，词汇使用错误，表达不清。建议用简单明了的句子表达观点，并举出具体例子。

示例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness. For example, Michael Jackson's song 'We Are the World' is very inspiring and makes people feel hopeful.

× I'm not very good at seeing be 'cause when I sing a song I always feel shy and embarrassed.

✓ I'm not very good at singing because when I sing a song I always feel shy and embarrassed.

这里的错误是动词形式错误，应该用动名词形式'singing'而不是'seeing'。动名词用来表示喜欢或擅长某事。

× I do not have too much free time to have a profession training of how to sing, but in my free time I always learn a new song by myself to kill the time.

✓ I do not have too much free time to have professional training on how to sing, but in my free time I always learn a new song by myself to kill time.

'profession training'应为'professional training'，形容词形式；'training of how to sing'应改为'training on how to sing'，介词用法错误；'kill the time'应为'kill time'，习惯用法。

× I will not sing a song for my mom in Mother's Day because his her she's a hard working person and every day.

✓ I will not sing a song for my mom on Mother's Day because she is a hardworking person every day.

代词使用错误，'his her she's'混用，应统一为'she is'；'in Mother's Day'应为'on Mother's Day'，介词错误。

× She go to work for me and I'm very grateful.

✓ She goes to work for me and I'm very grateful.

主谓一致错误，第三人称单数主语'she'后动词应加's'，即'goes'。

× Too hard. B 'cause. I really love her.

✓ She works too hard because I really love her.

句子不完整且代词使用混乱，应合并为完整句子，表达她工作很努力，且表达爱意。

× Michael Jackson's We Are the Words, This song is grandniece and which will bring.

✓ Michael Jackson's 'We Are the World', this song is grand and will bring.

歌曲名错误，应为'We Are the World'；'grandniece'错误，应为'grand'；句子结构不完整，需调整。

× The expection to people.

✓ The expectation to people.

单词拼写错误，'expection'应为'expectation'；句子不完整，建议补充完整表达。