唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding repetition and redundant phrases. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating "too high," you can say "my voice is too high-pitched."

示例: No, I don't really like singing because I'm bad at it and my voice is too high-pitched. However, I enjoy listening to music much more than singing.

建议: Focus on clarity and grammar. Use correct verb forms and sentence structures. Also, avoid unnecessary details and organize your answer logically with linking words. For example, explain briefly about learning singing and the competition experience.

示例: Yes, I learned to sing when I was a kid for a singing competition. My mom helped me memorize the lyrics, but unfortunately, I didn't win the competition.

建议: Try to avoid filler phrases like "That's such a great question." and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more concise.

示例: I want to sing for my family and friends because they have always supported me. Singing for them is a pleasurable and relaxing experience, and it makes them happy to know I sing just for them.

建议: Avoid repetition and filler words like "Sir." Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct minor grammar mistakes. Be more concise and natural.

示例: Yes, singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and relieve stress. It helps them feel more relaxed and joyful.

× So my mom helped me singing an remembering each and everyone lyrics of that particular song an unfortunately I was unable to a star singing competition.

✓ So my mom helped me sing and remember each and every lyric of that particular song and unfortunately I was unable to start the singing competition.

The verb 'helped' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'remembering' should be 'remember' to match the structure. 'Everyone' should be 'every' when modifying a singular noun 'lyric'. 'A star' is incorrect; it should be 'start' to indicate beginning the competition.

× So my mom helped me singing an remembering each and everyone lyrics of that particular song an unfortunately I was unable to a star singing competition.

✓ So my mom helped me sing and remember each and every lyric of that particular song and unfortunately I was unable to start the singing competition.

The word 'lyrics' is plural, but 'each and every' requires a singular noun, so 'lyric' is correct here.

× So my mom helped me singing an remembering each and everyone lyrics of that particular song an unfortunately I was unable to a star singing competition.

✓ So my mom helped me sing and remember each and every lyric of that particular song and unfortunately I was unable to start the singing competition.

The phrase 'unable to a star' is incorrect; it should be 'unable to start' where 'start' is the base form of the verb following 'to'.

× Along with that, they can get happy that I'll sing for only them and not the other people outside.

✓ Along with that, they can be happy that I'll sing only for them and not for other people outside.

The phrase 'get happy that' is incorrect; 'be happy that' is appropriate. Also, 'sing for only them' should be 'sing only for them' to correctly place the adverb 'only'. Additionally, 'not the other people outside' should be 'not for other people outside' to include the preposition 'for'.

× An along with that they can also be tension free anget less stressed after singing Sir.

✓ And along with that, they can also be tension-free and less stressed after singing, sir.

The word 'An' should be 'And'. 'Tension free' should be hyphenated as 'tension-free' when used as an adjective. 'anget' is a typo and should be 'and'. Also, a comma is needed before 'sir' as a form of address.