唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中有多处语法错误和用词不当，如“saying”应为“singing”，句子结构不够清晰，表达不够自然。建议加强基本语法和词汇的准确使用，避免重复和冗余，回答时尽量简洁明了。

示例: Yes, I love singing because it helps me relax and reduces the stress from my studies. Also, I believe singing can make people happier and improve their mood.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如“sayings courses”应为“singing courses”，句子不连贯。建议练习正确的时态和句子结构，使用连贯的表达方式。

示例: Actually, I wanted to learn singing when I was a child, but I didn't have enough time because I focused more on my schoolwork, so I never took any singing lessons.

建议: 回答表达不清晰，语法和词汇使用错误较多，句子断断续续。建议练习完整句子的表达，避免重复和语法错误，明确回答问题。

示例: I don't have a specific person to sing for because my parents don't like noisy things or loud songs, so it's hard for me to choose someone to sing to.

建议: 回答中多次出现“saying”代替“singing”，语法错误较多，表达不流畅。建议加强词汇准确性和句子连贯性，使用连接词使表达更自然。

示例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and release stress from work or school, making them feel happier.

× Yes I love saying because I think this can make me more relaxed and decrease my pressures on studies and school works.

✓ Yes, I love singing because I think this can make me more relaxed and decrease my pressures on studies and schoolwork.

这里'saying'是错误的动名词形式，正确的应该是'singing'，表示唱歌。'Saying'是说话的意思，不符合语境。

× And also. I think I'm saying can makes people more happy, more happy than to spend one time that I'm on just one.

✓ And also, I think singing can make people happier, happier than spending time alone.

这里'saying'应改为'singing'，'can makes'应改为'can make'，因为情态动词后动词用原形。'More happy'应改为'happier'，比较级形式。句子结构也需调整使其通顺。

× Actually now. I wanted when I was young, when I was a kid, but I did not have enough time on like sayings courses.

✓ Actually, I wanted to when I was young, when I was a kid, but I did not have enough time for singing courses.

'Wanted'后应接不定式'to sing'，这里省略了。'Sayings'应为'singing'。'On like'用法错误，应为'for'。

× I paid more attention on my school works so I'm never learned how to say.

✓ I paid more attention to my schoolwork, so I never learned how to sing.

'Paid attention'后应接介词'to'。'School works'应为不可数名词'schoolwork'。'I'm never learned'时态错误，应为'I never learned'。'Say'应为'sing'。

× Actually I do not have like a specific person or people to think for.

✓ Actually, I do not have a specific person or people to think of.

'Think for'用法错误，正确搭配是'think of'，表示考虑或想念某人。

× And my parents did do not like so noisy. Things or songs and.

✓ And my parents do not like things or songs that are so noisy.

'Did do not like'是错误的否定形式，应为'do not like'。句子结构不完整，需调整使其通顺。

× Yes. So I'm hard to say I have specific people to think for.

✓ Yes. So it's hard to say I have specific people to think of.

'I'm hard to say'表达不正确，应为'it's hard to say'。'Think for'应为'think of'。

× Yes, I think so. I think when people are saying.

✓ Yes, I think so. I think when people are singing.

'Saying'应为'singing'，符合上下文语境。

× This can release themselves and make them relax and also I reduced their pressures on their works.

✓ This can help them release themselves and make them relax, and also reduce their pressures from their work.

'Release themselves'用法不当，需加动词'help'。'I reduced'时态和主语不符，应为'also reduce'。'Works'应为不可数名词'work'。

× Order school works.

✓ Or school work.

'Order'应为'or'，表示选择关系。'School works'应为不可数名词'school work'。

× I think this will be make them happier when saying.

✓ I think this will make them happier when singing.

'Will be make'结构错误，应为'will make'。'Saying'应为'singing'。