唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Try to directly state why you like singing and avoid unclear phrases. Use simple, correct sentences and explain how singing helps you relieve stress with specific details.

示例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and feel refreshed. When I am frustrated, singing lifts my mood and reduces my stress.

建议: Try to use correct tense and sentence structure. Answer directly and add specific details about when and how you sing with friends. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

示例: No, I have never taken singing lessons, but I often sing with my friends when we go on picnics. They enjoy my singing, and it makes our time more fun.

建议: Your answer is confusing and unclear. Use simple sentences to explain who you want to sing for and why. Avoid unnecessary details and focus on clarity and coherence.

示例: I want to sing for my girlfriend because I want to surprise her. Last month, I sang a special song to show my feelings, and she was very happy.

建议: Your answer should be more natural and clear. Explain how singing or listening to songs can improve mood with specific examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

示例: Yes, singing can bring happiness because it helps people forget their problems. For example, when I feel sad, I listen to cheerful songs that improve my mood.

× this is the one of the way who's make me.

✓ this is one of the ways that make me.

The phrase 'the one of the way' is incorrect; it should be 'one of the ways' to indicate one among multiple ways. Also, 'who's' is a contraction of 'who is' which is incorrect here; 'that' is appropriate for things. The verb 'make' should agree with the plural 'ways'.

× Sprays iris refreshment and out of these strays.

✓ It sprays iris refreshment and gets rid of these stresses.

The original sentence is unclear and lacks proper structure. 'Sprays iris refreshment' is nonsensical; likely intended to express a refreshing effect. 'Out of these strays' is incorrect; 'stresses' fits the context better. The sentence needs rephrasing for clarity.

× It helps you to really from your all of the stress.

✓ It helps you to really get rid of all your stress.

The phrase 'really from your all of the stress' is incorrect. The verb 'get rid of' is needed to express removing stress. Also, 'your all of the stress' should be 'all your stress' for natural phrasing.

× No, I didn't ever learn how to sing, but I sometimes I used to sing with my friends when we are going to picnic.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing, but sometimes I used to sing with my friends when we went on picnics.

'Didn't ever learn' is awkward; 'have never learned' is more natural. 'I sometimes I used to sing' has redundant subjects; remove one 'I'. 'When we are going to picnic' should be past tense 'when we went on picnics' to match 'used to'.

× I used to sing and all my friends are enjoying with my song.

✓ I used to sing and all my friends enjoyed my songs.

'Are enjoying with my song' is incorrect; 'enjoyed my songs' fits better with past habitual action 'used to sing'. Also, 'songs' plural is more natural.

× I want to sing for my girlfriend last month.

✓ I wanted to sing for my girlfriend last month.

The time expression 'last month' requires past tense 'wanted' instead of present 'want'.

× I give give hard surprise to singing the song and I purpose heart by Missy song so she's also impressed by my phone.

✓ I gave a big surprise by singing a song and proposed to her with a Missy song, so she was also impressed by my phone.

The original sentence has repeated words, incorrect verb forms, and unclear meaning. 'Give give hard surprise' should be 'gave a big surprise'. 'Purpose heart by Missy song' likely means 'proposed to her with a Missy song'. 'Impressed by my phone' is unclear but kept as is. Verb tenses adjusted to past.

× Yes, of course singing bring happiness to people, it is the one of the way which make people out of history as it helps to make people happy.

✓ Yes, of course singing brings happiness to people; it is one of the ways that helps people forget their worries as it makes people happy.

'Singing bring' should be 'singing brings' for third person singular agreement. 'The one of the way' should be 'one of the ways'. 'Which make people out of history' is incorrect; likely intended 'helps people forget their worries'. Verb agreement corrected.

× When you are sad you will listen or a very good song which make our mood good.

✓ When you are sad, you can listen to a very good song which makes your mood better.

'Will listen or a very good song' is incorrect; 'can listen to a very good song' is appropriate. 'Which make our mood good' should be 'which makes your mood better' for subject-verb agreement and natural phrasing.