唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Jawaban Anda kurang alami dan terlalu singkat. Hindari pengulangan kata seperti "very, very" dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur untuk menjelaskan alasan Anda dengan jelas.

示例: No, I don't like singing because I think my voice is not very good, and I feel uncomfortable when I sing in front of others.

建议: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan terdapat kesalahan tata bahasa. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan hindari kesalahan seperti penggunaan kata yang tidak tepat dan kalimat yang tidak lengkap.

示例: I have never seriously learned how to sing because I believe my voice is not good, and I don't want to waste time on something I find difficult to improve.

建议: Jawaban Anda kurang koheren dan terdapat kesalahan tata bahasa. Jelaskan dengan kalimat yang lengkap dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih logis.

示例: I used to sing for my father, but he passed away three years ago. Now, I would like to sing for my husband.

建议: Jawaban Anda kurang terstruktur dan terdapat jeda yang tidak perlu. Gunakan kalimat yang lengkap dan jelaskan alasan Anda dengan lebih spesifik.

示例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because many love songs have beautiful lyrics that can touch people's hearts.

× No, I don't like singing because my voice is very, very terrible.

✓ No, I don't like singing because my voice is very, very bad.

The word 'terrible' is an adjective that usually describes something extremely bad or unpleasant, but in this context, 'bad' is more appropriate to describe the quality of the voice. Using 'terrible' here sounds unnatural. It's better to use 'bad' to express poor quality.

× I ever learned how to sing because.

✓ I have learned how to sing before.

The phrase 'I ever learned' is incorrect. The correct form is 'I have learned' or 'I have ever learned' in present perfect tense to indicate experience. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs to be finished properly.

× I believe that my voice is not really good and I don't want wasting my time to learn something that I know it's not my patient an.

✓ I believe that my voice is not really good and I don't want to waste my time learning something that I know I'm not patient with.

The phrase 'I don't want wasting' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't want to waste'. Also, 'patient an' is incorrect; the correct word is 'patient' and the phrase should be 'I'm not patient with'. The sentence structure is also improved for clarity.

× Something that I cannot handle.

✓ It's something that I cannot handle.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a subject. Adding 'It's' makes it a complete sentence.

× I do sing for my father, but he. He had passed away since three years ago.

✓ I used to sing for my father, but he passed away three years ago.

The phrase 'had passed away since three years ago' is incorrect. 'Had passed away' is past perfect tense which is not needed here. 'Since' is not used with a past time expression like 'three years ago'. The correct form is simple past 'passed away' and 'three years ago'.

× And now maybe I want to see to my husband.

✓ And now maybe I want to see my husband.

The preposition 'to' after 'see' is unnecessary and incorrect. The verb 'see' does not require 'to' when referring to a person.

× Yeah, I do think singing can bring happiness to people because. Oh, there's a lot. Song. Love song with the beautiful lyric.

✓ Yeah, I do think singing can bring happiness to people because there are a lot of songs, especially love songs with beautiful lyrics.

The original sentences are fragmented and lack proper structure. 'There's a lot. Song. Love song with the beautiful lyric.' is incorrect. It should be combined into a complete sentence with correct plural forms and articles.