唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then explain your reason with more natural phrasing. Avoid redundancy and unclear expressions. For example, instead of saying "My voice is not for singing" and "I have a high pitch to which is not good," you can say "I don't like singing because I think my high-pitched voice doesn't sound good."

示例: No, I don't like singing because I think my high-pitched voice doesn't sound good.

建议: Make your answer more coherent and complete. Use linking words properly and avoid incomplete sentences. For example, say "When I was a child, I joined the choir, but the teacher thought my voice was not good. As a result, my confidence decreased, and I lost interest in singing."

示例: When I was a child, I joined the choir, but the teacher thought my voice was not good. As a result, my confidence decreased, and I lost interest in singing.

建议: Answer directly and clearly. Use correct sentence structure and linking words. For example, "I love to sing, especially for my husband. I often joke around by singing to him."

示例: I love to sing, especially for my husband. I often joke around by singing to him.

建议: Make your answer more natural and fluent by combining sentences and using linking words properly. For example, "Yes, I think singing brings happiness to people because a lovely voice can entertain and cheer them up."

示例: Yes, I think singing brings happiness to people because a lovely voice can entertain and cheer them up.

× My voice is not for singing.

✓ My voice is not suitable for singing.

The preposition 'for' is used correctly, but the phrase 'not for singing' is awkward. Using 'suitable for singing' is more natural and grammatically correct in this context.

× I have a high pitch to which is not good.

✓ I have a high pitch, which is not good.

The phrase 'to which is not good' is incorrect. The correct relative pronoun 'which' should be used without 'to' to refer to 'high pitch'. Also, a comma is needed before 'which' to introduce the relative clause.

× The letter seems to find my voice not good.

✓ The letter seemed to find my voice not good.

The verb 'seems' is in present tense, but the context is past ('When I was a child'). Therefore, 'seemed' should be used to maintain past tense consistency.

× My confidence level decrease.

✓ My confidence level decreased.

The verb 'decrease' should be in past tense 'decreased' to agree with the past context of the sentence.

× And then I found singing not.

✓ And then I found that I did not like singing.

The sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. Adding 'that I did not like singing' completes the thought and corrects the sentence structure.

× To my husband and only for my husband ears I.

✓ I sing to my husband and only for his ears.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing pronouns. The corrected sentence places the subject 'I' at the beginning and uses the possessive pronoun 'his' correctly.

× A joke around through singing.

✓ I joke around through singing.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb, making it incomplete. Adding 'I' as the subject and 'joke around' as the verb corrects the sentence.

× Yes, singing brings happiness to people because.

✓ Yes, singing brings happiness to people because it keeps them entertained and happy.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'because' without completing the reason. Adding the clause 'it keeps them entertained and happy' completes the sentence logically.

× The lovely voice keeps people entertained and happy.

✓ A lovely voice keeps people entertained and happy.

Using 'The lovely voice' implies a specific voice previously mentioned, but here it is general. Using 'A lovely voice' is more appropriate to express a general statement.