唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中存在发音错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议练习正确发音并使用简单明了的句子表达观点。例如，可以先直接回答喜欢或不喜欢，然后给出具体原因。

示例: No, I don't like singing because I think I sing badly. When I listen to myself, I feel uncomfortable.

建议: 回答缺乏连贯性和清晰的结构，建议先直接回答是否学过唱歌，然后简要说明原因或经历，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

示例: No, I have never learned how to sing because I don't like singing. In high school, I had music classes, but I didn't enjoy them.

建议: 回答中表达不清，建议先明确回答想为谁唱歌，然后说明原因，使用连接词使表达更自然。

示例: I want to sing for my girlfriend because she always encourages me. Singing for her makes me happy.

建议: 回答内容混乱且不连贯，建议先明确表达观点，然后用具体理由支持，使用连接词使句子流畅。

示例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because studying and working can be tiring. Singing helps people relax and feel better.

× I don't like saying because saying I saying is so badly, so when I listen my saying I feel uncomfortable.

✓ I don't like singing because my singing is so bad, so when I listen to my singing I feel uncomfortable.

动词后面接动名词时，应该用-ing形式表示动作。这里'saying'应改为'singing'，且'so badly'应改为'so bad'，因为形容词修饰名词。

× so when I listen my saying I feel uncomfortable.

✓ so when I listen to my singing I feel uncomfortable.

动词'listen'后面需要加介词'to'，表示倾听某物。

× No, I don't learn how to.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing.

这里表示过去经历，应该用现在完成时，且动词'learn'后面需要加动词不定式或动名词。

× Samba 'cause I don't like saying so, but uh, what high school I.

✓ Because I don't like singing, but in high school I had a music class.

介词'in'用于表示在某个时间或地点，'what high school I'语序错误，应改为'in high school I had'。

× I have a music class so. But I don't like her music class.

✓ I had a music class, but I didn't like it.

描述过去的事情时，动词应使用过去时态。

× Well, I want to see you for my girlfriend, 'cause say she say I see you is so, so good.

✓ Well, I want to sing for my girlfriend, because she says my singing is so good.

'see you'应为'sing for'，且代词使用错误，需用'she says'和'my singing'。

× I say often encourage me.

✓ She often encourages me.

主语应为'she'，动词第三人称单数形式'encourages'，宾语为'me'。

× Yes, I think her saying can bring happiness to people because where? Workout study is so boring and so tired so people you really needed to see him to relax and.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because work and study are so boring and tiring, so people really need to sing to relax.

'her saying'应为'singing'，'workout'应为'work'，'needed'应为'need'，动词形式和词汇使用错误。

× Uh, we can ask her, my friend.

✓ We can ask my friend.

'ask her, my friend'结构不正确，应直接说'ask my friend'。