唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Tapai ko uttar ma English prayog natural chhaina ra arthapurna chaina. Tapai le prashna ko sidha uttar dinu parcha ra thulo vakya banaunu parcha. Aru kura jodne bela ma linking words prayog garnu hos ra uttar lai 5 vakya bhitra simit garnu hos.

示例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. When I have free time, I enjoy singing alone. It makes me feel happy and peaceful.

建议: Tapai ko uttar ma spashta ra sangaathit vakya chaina. Prashna ko sidha uttar dinu hos ra thulo vakya banaunu hos. Linking words jastai 'because' ko sahi prayog garnu hos ra uttar lai 5 vakya bhitra simit garnu hos.

示例: No, I have never learned how to sing because I did not have the opportunity during my childhood. Also, I did not know where to learn singing. However, I enjoy singing on my own.

建议: Tapai ko uttar ma English prayog ramro chhaina ra vakya haru adhura chhan. Prashna ko sidha uttar dinu hos ra supporting details sanga thulo vakya banaunu hos. Linking words jastai 'because' ko sahi prayog garnu hos ra uttar lai 5 vakya bhitra simit garnu hos.

示例: I want to sing for my mother because she is a strong woman who supports me in every situation. She has given me everything, so singing for her is my way to show gratitude.

建议: Tapai ko uttar ma English prayog thik chhaina ra vakya haru spashta chaina. Prashna ko sidha uttar dinu hos ra supporting details sanga thulo vakya banaunu hos. Linking words jastai 'because' ko sahi prayog garnu hos ra uttar lai 5 vakya bhitra simit garnu hos.

示例: I think singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them express their emotions. For example, funny and romantic songs can make people feel happy and relaxed.

× Yes, I like to singing.

✓ Yes, I like singing.

The verb 'like' is followed by the gerund form (verb + -ing) without 'to'. Therefore, 'like to singing' is incorrect; it should be 'like singing'. This is a common error in English verb patterns.

× I like. It helped me. It feels so motion and rephrasing on when I I have a freedom I sank. Alone and I like.

✓ I like it. It helps me. It feels so emotional and refreshing when I have freedom. I sing alone and I like it.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'Feels so motion' is incorrect; the intended word is likely 'emotional'. 'Rephrasing on' is incorrect; 'refreshing' fits better. Also, 'I sank' is incorrect; it should be 'I sing'. The sentence structure needs to be corrected for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I never learned how to sing.

✓ I have never learned how to sing.

Since the question is about experience up to now, the present perfect tense 'have never learned' is more appropriate than simple past 'never learned'. This tense expresses an action that has not happened at any time before now.

× Because. Oh, when I was a single. In the childhood and I. Not I learn. And people I don't know how to learn.

✓ Because, when I was single in my childhood, I did not learn. And I don't know how people learn.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. 'I was a single' is unclear; likely intended 'single' means 'young' or 'a child'. The sentence needs to be combined and clarified for meaning and grammatical correctness.

× Sing. I want to sing a forum my mother and because my mother is a strong.

✓ I want to sing for my mother because my mother is strong.

The preposition 'for' is used to indicate the beneficiary of an action. 'Sing a forum my mother' is incorrect; it should be 'sing for my mother'. Also, 'a strong' is incomplete; it needs a noun after 'strong'.

× Lady in the old C support my every situation and see give me everything I.

✓ She is an old lady who supports me in every situation and gives me everything I need.

The phrase 'Lady in the old C' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. It should be 'an old lady'. Also, verb agreement is needed: 'support' should be 'supports', and 'see give' should be 'gives'. The sentence needs to be completed for clarity.

× I think singing can bring happiness to people because when they are emotional and this thing the funny and the Romantics song and seeing an they are helped to make me make the feel happy and relaxed.

✓ I think singing can bring happiness to people because when they are emotional, funny and romantic songs help them feel happy and relaxed.

The original sentence is confusing and contains many errors. 'This thing the funny and the Romantics song and seeing an' is incorrect. The sentence needs to be restructured for clarity, proper noun forms ('Romantics' to 'romantic'), and correct verb usage.