唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答不够连贯，语法和词汇使用有误，建议练习用简单句表达喜欢唱歌的原因，并避免重复。

示例: Yes, I like singing because it has beautiful melodies and makes me feel happy.

建议: 回答中表达不清晰，语法错误较多，建议用简单句直接回答是否学过唱歌，并表达未来的兴趣。

示例: No, I have never learned how to sing, but I am interested in learning it in the future.

建议: 回答内容不完整且表达混乱，建议明确说明想为谁唱歌及原因，使用连贯句子。

示例: I want to sing for my parents because I love them and singing is a way to express my feelings.

建议: 回答中有发音和拼写错误，表达不清晰，建议用简单句说明唱歌如何带来快乐，并举例说明。

示例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because music helps us express our emotions and feel joyful.

× Yeah, I really like saying because I really like is a beautiful melody and the good was it. Why? I really like saying.

✓ Yeah, I really like singing because I really like it; it is a beautiful melody and the good part of it. Why? I really like singing.

这里'saying'应为'singing'，因为动词后接动名词形式表示喜欢做某事。

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

'learnt'是英式英语，'learned'是美式英语，二者均可，但需保持一致。此处可视为无误。

× Actually, no, no, yeah, I just say on my way. I never nerd how to sing, but I can know. How do you say in my future? Yeah, I really interested. Interesting about it.

✓ Actually, no, no, yeah, I just sing on my own. I never learned how to sing, but I can now. How do you say in my future? Yeah, I am really interested in it.

'say'应为'sing'，表示唱歌；'nerd'应为'learned'，过去式；'can know'应为'can now'；'really interested'后应加介词'in'。

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

此句无语法错误。

× I sing. I want to sing for my parents. Yeah. Yeah. Because I really love my parents and I think sometimes I don't. Want to express my emotion and laugh or sing but I can see.

✓ I want to sing for my parents because I really love them. Sometimes I don't want to express my emotions by laughing or singing, but I can see it.

句子结构混乱，需合并并调整表达，使意思清晰。

× Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?

✓ Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?

此句无语法错误。

× Of course I I believe saying can braid the Havanese for everyone because the music is a great way to express emotion. Includes happening so. It can.

✓ Of course, I believe singing can bring happiness to everyone because music is a great way to express emotions, including happiness. So, it can.

'saying'应为'singing'；'braid the Havanese'应为'bring happiness'；句子需调整使表达清晰。