唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer has good ideas but the sentences are unclear and some words are incorrect or incomplete, which affects naturalness and clarity. Try to use complete sentences and correct vocabulary. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. For example, you can say: "Yes, I love singing because it helps me feel better when I am sad. For instance, singing my favorite songs lifts my mood and relaxes me. I especially enjoy Lana Del Rey's songs because her voice sounds real and calming."

示例: Yes, I love singing because it helps me feel better when I am sad. For instance, singing my favorite songs lifts my mood and relaxes me. I especially enjoy Lana Del Rey's songs because her voice sounds real and calming.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many incomplete or incorrect phrases, which makes it hard to understand. Try to organize your ideas clearly with correct grammar and vocabulary. Also, avoid repeating ideas unnecessarily. For example, you can say: "No, I have never learned how to sing because I don't think I have a good voice. Besides, I am not very interested in singing; I prefer just listening to songs."

示例: No, I have never learned how to sing because I don't think I have a good voice. Besides, I am not very interested in singing; I prefer just listening to songs.

建议: Your answer shows hesitation and some incomplete sentences. Try to respond directly and clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid filler phrases like "I think" or "to be honest" unless necessary. For example, you can say: "I have never thought about this before, but if I had to sing for someone, it would be my loved one because singing for them would be special."

示例: I have never thought about this before, but if I had to sing for someone, it would be my loved one because singing for them would be special.

建议: Your answer has good points but the grammar and sentence structure need improvement. Try to use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid repetition. For example, you can say: "I believe it depends on the person because some people like singing while others do not. However, in my opinion, singing can bring happiness to many people. For example, I enjoy listening to songs when I feel sad because it cheers me up."

示例: I believe it depends on the person because some people like singing while others do not. However, in my opinion, singing can bring happiness to many people. For example, I enjoy listening to songs when I feel sad because it cheers me up.

× For example, singing my favorite song slips my mood and relaxed me.

✓ For example, singing my favorite song lifts my mood and relaxes me.

The verb 'slips' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'lifts' to express improving mood. Also, 'relaxed' should be 'relaxes' to agree with the singular subject 'singing my favorite song' in present tense.

× I'd also love. Lana Del Rey songs because her voice is so it a real and makes me feel so calm and her voice feels.

✓ I'd also love Lana Del Rey's songs because her voice is so real and makes me feel calm.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unnecessary words like 'so it a real' and repeated phrases. The correction removes fragments and clarifies the meaning with proper sentence structure.

× because I think my voice is not that. Singing friendly and I am also not interested in singing, I just listen it often bird in case.

✓ because I think my voice is not that good for singing and I am also not interested in singing; I just listen to it often, like birds in case.

The phrase 'Singing friendly' is incorrect; it should be 'good for singing'. Also, 'listen it' should be 'listen to it'. The sentence is corrected for adjective use and preposition use.

× I just listen it often bird in case.

✓ I just listen to it often, like birds in case.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before the object. Also, 'bird in case' is unclear; 'like birds in case' is a better expression.

× If I have to think, then no, no, it's not my thing and I'm really not interested.

✓ If I have to think about it, then no, it's not my thing and I'm really not interested.

The phrase 'If I have to think' is incomplete; it should be 'If I have to think about it' to be grammatically correct.

× OK. That's a interesting question.

✓ OK. That's an interesting question.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'interesting'.

× I think I have not expected this kind of questions.

✓ I think I have not expected this kind of question.

The phrase 'this kind of questions' is incorrect; 'kind' is singular and should be followed by a singular noun 'question'.

× And to be honest, I really don't think about it.

✓ And to be honest, I really haven't thought about it.

The tense should be present perfect 'haven't thought' to express an action not done up to now, matching the context.

× If I had to sing. For a specific person, that would be obviously my love of my life.

✓ If I had to sing for a specific person, that would obviously be the love of my life.

The sentence is fragmented; combining the two parts and correcting word order improves clarity.

× I think it depends uh someone like singing and someone does not like singing.

✓ I think it depends on whether someone likes singing or not.

The phrase 'depends uh someone like singing' is incorrect; 'depends on whether' is the correct modal expression.

× It is vary from person to person and in my opinion I think singing can brings happiness to people.

✓ It varies from person to person and in my opinion I think singing can bring happiness to people.

'vary' should be 'varies' to agree with singular subject 'it'. Also, 'can brings' should be 'can bring' because modal verbs are followed by base form of verb.

× For example, me, I love listening to singing as sometimes whenever I feel sad.

✓ For example, I love listening to singing whenever I feel sad.

The phrase 'me, I' is redundant and 'sometimes whenever' is awkward; simplifying improves clarity.