唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用正确的词汇表达。可以先直接回答问题，然后简要说明原因。

示例: No, I don't like singing because I'm not good at it and I don't enjoy it very much.

建议: 回答中语法混乱，表达不连贯，建议使用简单句子清晰表达学习经历，并说明学习内容和感受。

示例: Yes, I learned singing in primary school. My music teacher taught us some useful singing techniques that helped me improve.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不流畅。建议直接回答问题，说明原因，并避免重复。

示例: I don't usually sing for anyone because I don't like singing and find it difficult.

建议: 回答表达了观点，但存在语法和拼写错误。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，清晰表达观点并举例说明。

示例: Definitely yes. Singing can bring happiness and help people relieve stress. It is a good way to relax and improve mood.

× No, actually I'm I don't like saying because I'm not a big fan of thing.

✓ No, actually I don't like singing because I'm not a big fan of it.

句中使用了错误的代词“thing”，应使用“it”指代前文提到的“singing”。

× Otherwise I'm. Not good at singing because I my thing practic skill is so weak so I don't like it.

✓ Also, I'm not good at singing because my singing practice skill is very weak, so I don't like it.

句中“thing practic skill”表达不正确，应改为“singing practice skill”以准确表达意思。

× Sure, when I was in primary school, my music teacher always told me a lot of singing practice skills to have made to help us to how to learn singing skill and sing a great thorns.

✓ Sure, when I was in primary school, my music teacher always taught me many singing practice skills to help us learn singing skills and sing well. It was truly useful.

原句时态和表达混乱，需用过去时“taught”表示过去发生的动作，并调整句子结构使其通顺。

× Who do you want to sing for? Actually, I didn't sing for anyone, even my parents because I'm surely not a big fan of saying sounds so as.

✓ Actually, I don't sing for anyone, not even my parents, because I'm definitely not a big fan of singing sounds.

“didn't sing”与上下文时态不符，应使用一般现在时“don't sing”；“saying sounds”应为“singing sounds”。

× Quite difficult for me to sing to anyone otherwise. I'm truly dislike this hobby.

✓ It's quite difficult for me to sing for anyone. Also, I truly dislike this hobby.

“otherwise”用法不当，应改为“also”或“besides”表示递进关系；“I'm truly dislike”语法错误，应为“I truly dislike”。

× Definitely yes. The singer Graysons not only can bring people hapiness an can relive their on pressure and it's a necessary way for people to relax themselves and change their moods.

✓ Definitely yes. Singing not only can bring people happiness and relieve their pressure, but it's also a necessary way for people to relax themselves and change their moods.

“The singer Graysons”与上下文不符，应为“singing”；“hapiness”拼写错误，应为“happiness”；“relive their on pressure”应为“relieve their pressure”。