唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh dùng những câu không liên quan hoặc không đúng ngữ pháp. Ngoài ra, nên sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu trả lời ngắn gọn, tự nhiên.

示例: Yes, I like singing because it allows me to express my emotions and showcase my talents to others.

建议: Bạn nên trả lời câu hỏi một cách mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ. Câu trả lời cần có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và chi tiết hỗ trợ. Sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý và từ vựng phù hợp với ngữ cảnh.

示例: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I have learned some techniques by mimicking my favorite singer, Taylor Swift.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và cung cấp các chi tiết cụ thể, có liên kết logic với nhau.

示例: I want to sing for everyone, especially my family and friends, because I enjoy sharing my emotions and feelings with them through music.

建议: Bạn cần trả lời câu hỏi một cách rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp. Sử dụng câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ có liên kết với nhau bằng các liên từ phù hợp.

示例: Yes, I definitely believe that singing can bring happiness to people because music and lyrics can influence emotions and make listeners feel joyful.

× Yes, I love singing, one of the reason that I found out.

✓ Yes, I love singing, one of the reasons that I found out.

The word 'reason' should be plural 'reasons' because it refers to one among multiple reasons. Using singular here is incorrect when implying one of many.

× Singing is it against me and upload an opportunity to show my talents?

✓ Singing is important to me and provides an opportunity to show my talents.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Is it against me' and 'upload an opportunity' are incorrect phrases. The corrected sentence clarifies the intended meaning with proper structure and vocabulary.

× No, I have not learned how to sing, however. I am.

✓ No, I have not learned how to sing; however, I am trying.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. Adding 'trying' completes the thought and uses the present continuous tense appropriately to indicate ongoing effort.

× I learned some small techniques from my singer that I that I idolize.

✓ I learned some small techniques from the singer that I idolize.

The phrase 'my singer that I that I idolize' is redundant and incorrect. 'The singer that I idolize' is the correct form to refer to a specific person admired.

× For example, I love to hear Taylor Swift, so I usually like mimic.

✓ For example, I love to listen to Taylor Swift, so I usually like to mimic her.

The verb 'hear' should be 'listen to' when referring to actively paying attention to music. Also, 'like mimic' should be 'like to mimic her' to include the correct infinitive form and object pronoun.

× I want to sing for everybody that I ya.

✓ I want to sing for everybody that I know.

The phrase 'that I ya' is incorrect and likely a typo. Replacing it with 'that I know' makes the sentence meaningful and grammatically correct.

× My family is my friends and now maybe my all of us in the future.

✓ My family and my friends, and maybe all of us in the future.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and conjunctions, making it unclear. The correction separates the groups properly and clarifies the meaning.

× Well I kinda like to spread my emotion in my feelings to them through music.

✓ Well, I kind of like to spread my emotions and feelings to them through music.

'Kinda' is informal; 'kind of' is more appropriate. Also, 'emotion in my feelings' is redundant; 'emotions and feelings' is clearer. Adding commas improves readability.

× Yes, I definitely believe that thinking can bring happiness to everyone in one of the reason is that I I think music have a lyrics that can that can affect people emotions, especially when you hear.

✓ Yes, I definitely believe that singing can bring happiness to everyone. One of the reasons is that I think music has lyrics that can affect people's emotions, especially when you hear them.

'Thinking' should be 'singing' to match context. 'One of the reason' should be 'one of the reasons' (plural). 'Music have' should be 'music has' (subject-verb agreement). 'People emotions' should be 'people's emotions' (possessive). The sentence is restructured for clarity.