记忆— Part 1 评分报告

练习Part12026-10-18 13:59:53

对话

Part 1

考官

Are you good at memorising things?

考生

Yes.

考官

Have you ever forgotten something important?

考生

Yes.

考官

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

考生

My flower.

考官

How do you remember important things?

考生

By paper.

评估

总分

总分: 5.0流畅度与连贯性: 5.0发音: 5.0语法: 5.0词汇: 5.0

Part 1

Are you good at memorising things?

分数: 35.0

建议: 回答切题,但只有一个词,缺少具体信息。先直接回答,再补充一两个细节,例如你擅长记什么、使用什么方法或举一个例子。

示例: Yes, I’m fairly good at memorising things, especially names and numbers. I usually repeat them a few times, which helps me remember them.

Have you ever forgotten something important?

分数: 35.0

建议: 回答了是否发生过,但没有说明忘记了什么以及造成的结果。可以简要描述一件具体事件,并用连接词说明后果或你的感受。

示例: Yes, I once forgot an important appointment with my dentist. I was busy with schoolwork and didn’t write it down, so I had to book another appointment.

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

分数: 20.0

建议: “My flower”表达不够清楚,无法确定你需要记住关于花的什么事情。请说清楚具体任务,例如给花浇水,并补充频率或提醒方式。

示例: I need to remember to water my flowers every morning. I keep them by the window, so I usually notice when the soil is dry.

How do you remember important things?

分数: 25.0

建议: “By paper”不符合自然的英语表达。可以说“write them down on paper”或“make a list”,并补充你何时查看记录,以及这种方法为什么有效。

示例: I usually write important things down in a notebook. Then I check it every morning, so I’m less likely to forget appointments or tasks.

语法

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× By paper.

✓ By writing them down on paper.

表示把信息写在纸上时,通常用介词“on”,而不是“by”。“By”后面一般接表示方式的名词或动名词。可以说“By writing them down on paper”(把它们写在纸上来记)。

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