记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 質問に直接答えられていますが、“memories things”や“I've always have note”など文法・語形の誤りがあり、言い直しも多いため意味が伝わりにくくなっています。「覚えるのが苦手な理由」→「対策」の順に簡潔に述べましょう。“memorise things”と“write things down”の表現を使うと自然です。

示例: Actually, I'm not very good at memorising things because it takes me a long time to remember information. I usually write important things down in a notebook so I don't forget them.

建议: 「重要なことを忘れたことがある」という回答はできていますが、具体的な出来事がなく、“I have a note and takes a note”の文法も不自然です。過去の例を一つ挙げ、その後に今行っている対策を説明すると、内容がより具体的でまとまりのある回答になります。

示例: Yes, I have. I once forgot an appointment because I hadn't written down the time. Since then, I’ve started putting important dates and tasks in my phone’s calendar.

建议: 家までの道順を覚える必要があるという答えは質問に関連していますが、“one of the important things do I remember”は語順が誤っており、理由を述べる文も途中で終わっています。「何を覚えるか」を明確に述べた後、なぜ必要なのかを完結した文で説明しましょう。

示例: I need to remember the route from work to my home. It’s useful because I sometimes take different streets, and knowing the way helps me get home without relying on my phone.

建议: メモやスマートフォンを使うという方法は適切ですが、“write ... on notes”や“smartphone is very useful things”は不自然です。“write things down in a notebook”や“use my phone’s reminder app”のような表現を使いましょう。最後の文が途中で切れているため、方法を一つ説明して回答を完結させてください。

示例: I usually write important tasks in a notebook or add them to my phone’s calendar. I also set reminders for appointments, so I get a notification when I need to do something.

× Actually I'm not good at memories things 'cause I think I it takes time to like memor, memorize and remember things.

✓ Actually, I'm not good at memorizing things because I think it takes time to memorize and remember them.

After the phrase 'good at,' use a noun or a gerund ending in '-ing.' Therefore, 'memories' should be 'memorizing.' Also, use 'it takes time' without the extra subject 'I.'

× So I've always have note and memorize something.

✓ So I've always taken notes to help me memorize things.

In the present perfect, use 'have' followed by a past participle. The past participle of 'take' is 'taken,' not 'take' or 'have.'

× So I've always have note and memorize something.

✓ So I've always taken notes to help me memorize things.

'Note' is a countable noun, and the speaker is referring to notes generally, so the plural form 'notes' is appropriate. Use plural 'things' when referring to things in general.

× So I would say yes but recently I have a note and takes a note when I when I have something important.

✓ So I would say yes, but recently I take notes whenever I have something important to remember.

The subject is 'I,' so the verb must be 'take,' not 'takes.' Use 'take notes' to describe the habitual action of writing things down.

× I would say one of the important things do I remember is the way to my home.

✓ I would say one of the important things I need to remember is the way home.

Do not use question word order inside a statement. In the clause 'one of the important things I need to remember,' the subject comes before the verb, and the auxiliary 'do' is unnecessary.

× As I said, I always write important things on notes and also smartphone is very useful things to memorize things.

✓ As I said, I always write important things in my notes, and a smartphone is also a very useful tool for remembering things.

Use 'in my notes' when referring to information written in notes. 'On notes' is not the appropriate preposition in this context.

× As I said, I always write important things on notes and also smartphone is very useful things to memorize things.

✓ As I said, I always write important things in my notes, and a smartphone is also a very useful tool for remembering things.

A singular countable noun such as 'smartphone' needs an article when used this way. Use 'a smartphone.'

× As I said, I always write important things on notes and also smartphone is very useful things to memorize things.

✓ As I said, I always write important things in my notes, and a smartphone is also a very useful tool for remembering things.

'A smartphone' is singular, so its complement should also be singular: 'a very useful tool,' not 'very useful things.'