记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答は直接的だが文法ミスと表現の不自然さがある。具体的には現在形・完了形の使い分け（"I have study" → "I have studied"）、不定詞や動名詞の扱い、冗長な部分の整理が必要。また、話を自然に聞かせるために一つのトピック文（主張）を示した後に短い理由を一つか二つで支える練習をすると良い。発話は最大5文に収め、接続詞（because, so, although）を使って論理的につなぐと効果的。

示例: I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I've studied English for many years, but I still have trouble remembering new vocabulary because I don't review it regularly.

建议: 内容は理解できるが時制の選択と表現の明確化が必要（"I had forgotten" → "I have forgotten" または過去の特定の出来事なら過去形"I forgot"）。"when I talked with my friends and I" は不自然。具体例を一つに絞り、理由や結果をはっきり述べると良い。接続語（for example, so, because）を用いて論理的に説明すること。語彙はより正確な単語を選ぶ（"memories with us" → "shared memories"）。

示例: Yes. For example, once when friends were talking about a trip we took, I couldn't remember the details. They were disappointed because those were shared memories, and I felt bad about forgetting.

建议: 回答は複数のポイントを含んでおり良いが、文法の自然さと語順、語彙の選択を改善すべき（"I keep studying" → "I study" または "I study every day"）。"when I go travel" は正しくは "when I travel"。一つの主張を述べてから別の主張へ自然につなぐために接続詞（and, also）を使い、具体性（どの単語やどんな風景）を加えるとさらに良い。

示例: I study every day, so I need to remember the English vocabulary I learn. Also, when I travel I try to remember the scenery and landscapes, especially places with unique architecture or natural views.

建议: 意図は明確で方法も述べられているが、文法と語順、単語選びの改善が必要（"I believe my day diary" → "I keep a diary"、"I attached some photo" → "I attach photos"）。また、文を2〜3文に分けて理由や効果を示すとより自然。接続詞（so, which, and） を使って説明を整理する。

示例: I keep a diary almost every day to record important events, and I attach photos to the entries. This helps me remember specific days and the details of what happened.

× No, unfortunately I think I'm not good at memorizing something because I study.

✓ No, unfortunately I think I'm not good at memorizing things because I study.

The noun should be plural ('things') after 'memorizing' to match general, unspecified objects. Use 'things' not 'something' when speaking generally.

× I have study English for a long time but I can't remember a lot of vocabulary in English.

✓ I have studied English for a long time but I can't remember many English vocabulary words.

The present perfect requires the past participle 'studied' instead of 'have study'. Also, 'a lot of vocabulary' is awkward; use 'many English vocabulary words' or 'many vocabulary items'. 'Many' is used with countable nouns.

× Yes, sometimes I had forgotten something important, for example when I talked with my friends and I.

✓ Yes, sometimes I have forgotten something important, for example when I was talking with my friends and I.

Use present perfect 'have forgotten' for life experiences or repeated past actions. Also, 'when I talked with my friends and I' is ungrammatical; use 'when I was talking with my friends' or 'when I talked with my friends'. Remove the extra 'and I'.

× My friends remind me of some memories with us, but I couldn't remember it, so my friends felt sad.

✓ My friends reminded me of some shared memories, but I couldn't remember them, so my friends felt sad.

Tense consistency: 'remind' should be 'reminded' with past context. 'Some memories with us' is unnatural; use 'shared memories'. 'It' refers to plural 'memories' so use 'them'.

× Now I keep studying every day, so I want to remember the vocabulary I studied, but umm, when I go travel I want to remember the scenery and landscape.

✓ Now I keep studying every day, so I want to remember the vocabulary I study, but when I travel I want to remember the scenery and the landscapes.

Use 'study' for habitual present (not 'studied'). 'Go travel' is incorrect; use 'travel' or 'go travelling'. 'Landscape' often plural as 'landscapes' and include article 'the' for specificity.

× I believe my day diary almost every day so it reminds me of the specific day and I attached some photo in my diary so it also reminds me specific memory.

✓ I write in my daily diary almost every day, so it reminds me of specific days, and I attach some photos in my diary so they also remind me of particular memories.

'I believe my day diary' is incorrect; use 'I write in my daily diary'. Use plural 'photos' and 'they' to match. Use 'specific days' and 'particular memories' for clarity and correct prepositions ('remind me of').