记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答总体能表达观点，但存在语法与用词错误、冗余和句子不够简洁。建议：1) 开头避免冗余短语（如“In my humble opinion”），直接给出主题句。2) 修正语法（复数/单数一致、时态）。3) 使用连接词简洁说明原因并给出具体例子，以增强自然与连贯性。4) 将答案控制在3-4句内，避免重复。

示例: Yes, I'm quite good at memorising things. As a STEM student, I study a lot of biology, and I often get the highest marks in that subject, which shows I can retain factual information well. For example, I can remember detailed processes and terminology from lectures, so I usually perform strongly in tests.

建议: 回答内容相关但存在明显语法错误和表达不流畅（动词形式、时态和重复）。建议：1) 使用正确时态和动词形式（e.g., "I have forgotten" 或过去时 "I forgot"）。2) 删除重复短语并用连词使叙述更连贯（then, so）。3) 提供更具体细节（何时、如何解决、学到什么）。4) 控制句子数量，不超过4句。

示例: Yes, I've forgotten something important before. For instance, once I tried to log into my bank account but I couldn't because I had forgotten my card number, so I called customer service and they helped me reset my login. After that experience, I started saving essential numbers in a secure password manager.

建议: 回答表达了主要意思但有不自然及混乱的部分（多余短语、语法、含糊的句子“My life, my dad will be wasted”）。建议：1) 去掉口语填充词（uh）和不必要的重复（in my opinion / I think）。2) 用简洁句子说明原因并举例说明如何用清单提升效率。3) 避免模糊或不合逻辑的表述，确保每句有明确含义。

示例: I need to remember my daily to-do list. If I don't plan my tasks, I feel disorganised and less motivated, so I write a list each morning and prioritise three main tasks to make sure I use my time well.

建议: 回答内容清楚但有语法和表达问题（词序、冗余）。建议：1) 使用正确且自然的句子结构（e.g., "I remember important things by writing them down in my phone's notes app"). 2) 补充具体方法（例如提醒、分类、设置通知），展示细节与连贯性。3) 保持回答简短（2-3句），用连接词增强逻辑。

示例: I usually remember important things by writing them down in my phone's notes app and setting reminders. For example, I add deadlines with alarms and group notes by topic so I'm reminded at the right time.

× It is because I'm a STEM student and I need to study biology.

✓ It is because I'm a STEM student and I need to study biology.

句子本身时态正确（一般现在时表事实/习惯），不需要修改。保留原句。

× Out of all the science sub subjects, I've realised that my biology results is always the highest and that's why I think I'm good at it.

✓ Out of all the science sub-subjects, I've realised that my biology results are always the highest, and that's why I think I'm good at it.

原句中主语是复数“results”，谓语用单数“is”造成主谓不一致。应使用复数动词“are”。另外“sub subjects”重复，可合为“sub-subjects”或“subsubjects”。建议注意主语单复数并保持一致。

× Of course I have forget something important.

✓ Of course I have forgotten something important.

本句使用现在完成时（have + 过去分词），但原句将动词用原形“forget”，应使用过去分词“forgotten”。建议掌握完成时结构：have/has + 过去分词。

× I remember last time at when I tried to log in into my bank account.

✓ I remember last time when I tried to log in to my bank account.

原句多余介词“at”且“log in into”重复使用不正确。常用搭配是“log in to”或“log into”。同时“last time when”可以改为“last time”或“when I last tried”，应简化句子结构。建议去掉多余词并使用正确的动词短语搭配。

× I can't log in because I forget the number of my of my card.

✓ I couldn't log in because I had forgotten the number of my card.

叙述过去发生的事应使用过去时。原句混用了现在时“can't”与一般现在“forget”，应改为过去时“couldn't”和过去完成或过去式“had forgotten/forgot”。此外有重复“of my of my”。建议根据时间顺序选择正确时态并检查重复词。

× Therefore I need to call the admin to help me log in into my account so I can do online transfer.

✓ Therefore I needed to call the admin to help me log in to my account so I could make an online transfer.

继续叙述过去事件，应把现在时改为过去时（need → needed，can → could）。“log in into”重复，应用“log in to”或“log into”。“do online transfer”不太地道，改为“make an online transfer”。建议根据语境一致使用过去时并使用常见搭配。

× In my opinion, I think I need to remember my To Do List every day.

✓ In my opinion, I need to remember my to-do list every day.

句子中“I think”与“In my opinion”重复表达意见，冗余可删去“I think”。此外“To Do List”大小写应统一为“to-do list”。时态（一般现在）用于习惯正确。建议避免重复表达并规范书写。

× It is because if I didn't plan my To Do List every day, I will feel that my day is unorganized and it makes me demotivated.

✓ It is because if I don't plan my to-do list every day, I feel that my day is unorganized and it makes me feel demotivated.

原句在条件句中混用了过去时“didn't”与将来时“will”。一般现在时用于真实条件句（习惯事实）：if + present, main clause present。还需补全“feel demotivated”前加“feel”。建议在真实条件句中使用一般现在时并保持主句时态一致。

× My life, my dad will be wasted.

✓ My life would be wasted, and so would my dad's.

原句语序和意义不清晰。“My life, my dad will be wasted”不符合英语句法，应明确想表达的内容。如果想说“我的生活和我父亲的生活都会被浪费”，可改为上述句子。注意时态要与上下文一致（此处可用“would”）。建议重写句子以清晰表达意图并保持时态一致。

× In my opinion, I remember important things by writing down in my notes in my phone did.

✓ In my opinion, I remember important things by writing them down in the notes on my phone.

使用“by + 动名词”表示方法时应接动名词短语，此处“writing down”后应接宾语“them”；“in my notes in my phone did”结构混乱且多余“did”。正确表达为“writing them down in the notes on my phone”。建议学习“by + verb-ing”结构并注意宾语位置与介词搭配。

× This is because when I open my phone I get to look right into the notes app and it reminds me to do that particular thing.

✓ This is because when I open my phone I get to look right at the notes app and it reminds me to do that particular thing.

句子整体时态（一般现在）用于习惯事实正确。需修改介词“look right into”为更自然的“look right at”来表示注视应用程序。建议注意常用介词搭配以使表达更地道。