记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and direct, start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific supporting example using linking words. Avoid repetition and minor grammar errors (use present tense consistently and correct verb forms).

示例: Yes, I'm quite good at memorising things. For example, when I share stories with my family, I often recall specific dates and details that others forget, which helps keep our conversations accurate. Because I practise telling these stories regularly, my memory for personal events has improved.

建议: Answer directly and give a clear past example if possible. Explain the strategy you use in one or two linked sentences, and correct vague phrasing (e.g., 'skip that' is unclear).

示例: I rarely forget important things. If something matters, I make reminders on my phone and take photos or videos as evidence, so I can check them later; for instance, I once photographed a receipt to avoid losing it.

建议: Be specific about daily items you must remember and organise your answer. Fix unclear sentences and use linking words to connect ideas. Limit to 2–3 short sentences with concrete examples.

示例: In daily life I need to remember appointments, bills and grocery items. For example, I use a phone calendar for appointments and take photos of meals when I try new recipes so I can remember ingredients later.

建议: Start with a clear topic sentence stating your main method, then briefly explain why it works and give a short example. Remove filler words (uh, I think) and correct small grammar issues (e.g., 'take photos of something important').

示例: I usually take photos of important items or documents to remember them. This is effective because I can quickly review the images on my phone and share them with others if needed; for example, I photographed a warranty card so I could find it when repairs were required.

× I think I'm good at memorizing things because every time I talked about the past with my friends or my family, I always come up with something that everyone around me cannot come up with, so I think I remember well.

✓ I think I'm good at memorizing things because whenever I talk about the past with my friends or my family, I always come up with something that others cannot, so I think I remember well.

Error type: present vs past inconsistency. The sentence mixes past tense 'talked' with present habitual meaning. Use present simple 'talk' (or 'whenever I talk') to express habitual actions. Also simplify 'everyone around me cannot come up with' to 'others cannot' for clarity.

× I don't think I have forgotten something important because if it's very important I always try not to forget and skip that. So by using like photos or video.

✓ I don't think I have forgotten anything important because if something is very important I always try not to forget it, for example by using photos or videos.

Error: incorrect modal/structure and fragments. 'Skip that' is incorrect here; use 'try not to forget it'. Also 'So by using like photos or video' is a fragment; combine into the sentence and use plural 'videos' and 'anything' after negative.

× In my daily life I don't think this need to remember something a lot, but every time I have mail I eat something. I always take photo so that I could recall what I ate.

✓ In my daily life I don't think I need to remember many things, but whenever I receive a meal I eat it. I always take photos so that I can recall what I ate.

Errors: incorrect pronoun and noun forms and awkward clauses. 'This need to remember something a lot' is ungrammatical—use 'I need to remember many things'. 'Have mail I eat something' likely intended 'receive a meal' or 'have a meal'. Use plural 'photos' and modal 'can' for ability in present. 'Could' implies conditional/past.

× As I mentioned before, I always try to take photos something important because it's, I think it's the easiest way to, uh, recall because we all have mobile phones, so we could also share to other person.

✓ As I mentioned before, I always try to take photos of important things because I think it's the easiest way to recall them; we all have mobile phones, so we can also share them with other people.

Error: missing preposition and incorrect verb forms. Use 'take photos of' (preposition). 'Recall because we all have' is repetitive; simplify. Use present modal 'can' not 'could' for ability. Change 'other person' to plural 'other people' and ensure pronoun agreement 'share them'.