记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 문장이 자연스럽지 않고 문법 오류와 중복 표현이 많습니다. 질문에 직접 답하고 그 이유를 간단히 덧붙인 뒤 예시를 하나 들어 구체성을 높이세요. 1) 주제 문장을 명확히 시작하세요(예: No, I'm not very good at memorising things). 2) 이유를 간단히 설명하고(예: I often get distracted), 3) 하나의 구체적 예시로 마무리하세요. 연결어(so, because, for example)를 사용해 문장의 흐름을 개선하세요.

示例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I often get distracted. For example, I frequently forget details from conversations with my family or friends, so I sometimes miss important points discussed at work.

建议: 답은 직접적이지만 문법 오류(시제·주어·관사)와 잦은 망설임이 점수를 낮춥니다. 경험을 말할 때는 과거 시제를 일관되게 사용하고, 세부사항을 하나 추가해 사건을 명확히 하세요. 또한 망설임을 줄이고 문장을 간결하게 연결어(for example, because, so)를 쓰세요.

示例: Yes, I have. For example, once at work I forgot the decision made in an important meeting. When my manager asked me about it, I couldn't give a clear answer, so it caused some confusion.

建议: 응답이 핵심을 말하나 문장이 부자연스럽고 단어 선택이 어색합니다. 질문에 바로 답하고 구체적인 방법(무엇을 적는지, 얼마나 자주 확인하는지)을 하나 덧붙이세요. 연결어(and, so, therefore)를 사용해 문맥을 매끄럽게 만드세요.

示例: I need to remember appointments and tasks in my daily life. Therefore I usually jot them down or make a checklist, and I review the list every morning to make sure I haven't missed anything.

建议: 생각은 명확하지만 발화에 반복과 망설임이 많고 문법이 약간 어색합니다. 간결한 주제 문장으로 시작하고, 구체적으로 어떤 앱 기능을 쓰는지(알림, 카테고리 등)와 그 이유를 덧붙이세요. 연결어(and, because)를 사용해 논리성을 높이세요.

示例: I usually remember important things by using a checklist app on my phone because it sends reminders and lets me organise tasks into categories. This way I can quickly check what I need to do and set alarms so I don't forget.

× Actually not.

✓ Actually, no.

'Actually not' is colloquial and not the best response to a yes/no question. Use 'Actually, no' to clearly negate in present context.

× I'm not good at memorizing things.

✓ I'm not good at memorizing things.

Sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. It correctly uses present tense to describe a general ability.

× I usually forgot a lot of things, especially talking with my friend and boyfriend and family.

✓ I usually forget a lot of things, especially when talking with my friends, my boyfriend, and my family.

Used 'forgot' (past) but 'usually' requires present simple habitual tense 'forget'. Also plural 'friends' likely and need preposition 'when' for 'talking'. Add commas for clarity.

× Sometimes in my company we have a meeting, a serious meeting, but I.

✓ Sometimes at my company we have serious meetings, but I forget things then.

Original sentence is incomplete ('but I.' incomplete clause). Use 'at my company' for location, plural 'meetings' for habitual, and finish idea 'I forget things then'.

× Umm, when I worked in my company we have a serious meeting but I forgot our meetings decision so umm, my manager asked for me but I can't answer that clear.

✓ Umm, when I was working at my company we had a serious meeting but I forgot the decision from our meeting, so my manager asked me about it and I couldn't answer clearly.

Tense consistency: 'when I worked' should align with past 'we had'. Use 'forgot' is fine but specify 'the decision' and 'asked me about it' rather than 'asked for me'. 'Can't' should be past 'couldn't' and adverb 'clearly' not adjective 'clear'.

× I usually use. Note the jot it down is really useful for me.

✓ I usually use notes. Jotting things down is really useful for me.

Fragment 'I usually use.' is incomplete. 'Note' should be plural 'notes' or gerund 'jotting'. Use gerund 'Jotting things down' rather than 'Note the jot it down'.

× I make some checklist and I'm doing something and revise some.

✓ I make some checklists, I write things I need to do, and I revise them.

'Checklist' plural 'checklists'. 'I'm doing something' is vague; better 'I write things I need to do'. 'Revise some' unclear; specify 'revise them'. Maintain parallel structure.

× I remember important thing through checklist umm.

✓ I remember important things through a checklist.

Use plural 'things' and article 'a checklist'. 'Through checklist' needs article for countable noun.

× This day I use the the app in the phone Umm.

✓ Nowadays I use an app on my phone.

'This day' is unnatural; use 'Nowadays'. 'the the app' duplicated; 'an app' indefinite article fits. Use 'on my phone' not 'in the phone'.

× The checklist app is really useful and it's easy to access.

✓ The checklist app is really useful and it's easy to access.

Sentence is acceptable as is. 'The checklist app' is fine if referring to a specific app; 'it's easy to access' correctly describes usability.