记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 答えは明確ですが、文法ミスと自然さの欠如が見られます。日本語での具体的改善点：1) 主語と動詞の一致や時制を直す（例："that's helped me remind them" は不自然）。2) 冗長な表現を避け、文を3文以内にまとめる。3) つなぎ言葉（First, For example, Thereforeなど）を適切に使う。4) 単語選択を改善（"memorizing" と "remembering" の使い分け）。

示例: I'm not very good at memorising things. Instead, I rely on notes and revision: for example, when I learn new English words, I write them down and review them daily, which helps me remember them.

建议: 内容は伝わりますが、流暢さと一貫性に問題があります。日本語での具体的改善点：1) 不要な語（"Because" で始めるなど）を削除して直接答える。2) 文の順序と論理接続詞を整理する（"For example" の誤用を直す）。3) 語彙や表現を自然にする（"I realized it at the airport" の後に結果を明確に）。

示例: Yes, I have. Once I left my passport at home and only noticed it at the airport, so I had to cancel the trip and go back to get it. Since then, I always check my bag the night before.

建议: 回答は簡潔で的確ですが、文法と語法の改善余地があります。日本語での具体的改善点：1) 冠詞と複数形の一致（"this help" は "this helps"）。2) より自然な導入と追加理由を一文でつなげる。3) 具体性を高めるために頻度や方法を付け加えると良い。

示例: I usually need to remember my keys and my phone before leaving the house because I use them all day. For example, I quickly check my bag every morning, which helps me avoid being late.

建议: 意味は伝わりますが、不自然な表現と文法ミスがあります。日本語での具体的改善点：1) 冗長な語句を削除し、簡潔にする（"that a lot are reliable" は削除）。2) 名詞の複数形や冠詞を直す（"deadline"→"deadlines"）。3) 結びの文を完全な形にする（"my phone notification is" は不完全）。

示例: I usually use my phone calendar and set reminders to avoid forgetting important things. For example, I add appointments and deadlines, and my phone notifications prompt me when something is coming up.

× For example, when I learn new English words, I write down them and review them every day, and that's helped me remind them.

✓ For example, when I learn new English words, I write them down and review them every day, and that helps me remember them.

The errors include incorrect word order with the verb phrase 'write down them' (object should come between write and down) and incorrect verb forms 'that's helped' and 'remind' that do not match the present habitual meaning. Use 'write them down' and present simple 'helps' for habitual actions, and 'remember' (verb) rather than 'remind' (which requires an object). Suggestions: place object before particle ('write them down'), use present simple for routines ('helps'), and choose correct verb ('remember').

× Because yes, I have. I once forgot my passport at home before a flight and I realized it at the airport.

✓ Yes, I have. I once forgot my passport at home before a flight and realized it at the airport.

The sentence contains unnecessary 'Because' at the start and a redundant 'I' before 'realized' which is acceptable but wordy. The main issue is style rather than tense; however maintain simple past ('forgot', 'realized') without extra words. Suggestion: remove leading 'Because' and streamline to 'and realized it at the airport.'

× I guess I was hardly For example, I had to cancel the trip and had to go back to my house.

✓ I guess I was careless. For example, I had to cancel the trip and go back home.

'I was hardly' is incomplete and ungrammatical; 'hardly' is an adverb meaning 'almost not' and needs context. The sentence also repeats 'had to' unnecessarily and uses 'my house' where 'home' is more natural. Suggestion: use an adjective 'careless' to describe the speaker, avoid redundant verbs, and prefer 'go back home.'

× So since then I always check my bag the night before.

✓ So since then I have always checked my bag the night before.

The phrase 'since then' requires a present perfect tense to describe a continuing action from past to present: 'have always checked' or present perfect continuous. Alternatively, if speaker means a current routine, 'I always check my bag the night before' is acceptable; but with 'since then' use present perfect. Suggestion: match 'since then' with present perfect ('have always checked') or remove 'since then' to keep simple present.

× For example, I always check my bag quickly in the morning and this help me avoid being late.

✓ For example, I always check my bag quickly in the morning and this helps me avoid being late.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'this' (singular) requires 'helps' (third person singular present). Use 'helps' instead of 'help'. Suggestion: ensure verb agrees with subject: this helps.

× Well, I usually remember important things by putting them in my phone calendar.

✓ Well, I usually remember important things by putting them in my phone's calendar.

The sentence is mostly correct but needs the possessive form 'phone's calendar' for clarity. 'Putting' is correct as a gerund following the preposition 'by'. Suggestion: use possessive noun for clarity: 'my phone's calendar.'

× I set reminders because it helps me not to forget and that a lot are reliable.

✓ I set reminders because they help me not to forget and many of them are reliable.

Pronoun agreement and word order issues: 'it' does not agree with plural 'reminders'; use 'they'. 'That a lot are reliable' is ungrammatical; better to say 'many of them are reliable.' Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number and use natural phrasing ('many of them').

× For example, I put appointments and deadline there and my phone notification is.

✓ For example, I put appointments and deadlines there and my phone notifies me.

Multiple errors: 'deadline' should be plural to match 'appointments' or use 'the deadline' if singular. 'There' is vague but acceptable; better to say 'in my calendar' or keep 'there'. The clause 'my phone notification is' is incomplete. Use an active verb: 'my phone notifies me.' Suggestion: pluralize 'deadlines' and complete the clause: 'my phone notifies me.'