记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, dùng câu chủ đề trực tiếp và rút ngắn (không quá 5 câu). Sửa ngữ pháp (thì, cấu trúc) và loại bỏ từ thừa. Thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể về nguyên nhân và cách cải thiện, dùng liên từ để mạch lạc.

示例: I used to be good at memorising things, but recently my memory has worsened because my workload and studies have increased. To cope, I now prioritise tasks and review important information every evening so I don't forget it.

建议: Cần kể việc đã xảy ra một cách súc tích, đúng thì quá khứ, bỏ tiếng ồn (uh) và dùng từ chính xác. Thêm kết quả hoặc cách bạn khắc phục để câu đầy đủ và liên kết với liên từ như "so" hoặc "because".

示例: Yes, I once forgot to pay an electricity bill, which caused a lot of trouble. Fortunately my mother reminded me, so I paid it immediately and set a reminder on my phone to avoid repeating the mistake.

建议: Câu thiếu rõ ràng và có lỗi danh sách; trộn lẫn ý về mật khẩu và hóa đơn. Hãy bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, phân biệt các mục cần nhớ, dùng từ chính xác (e.g. "monthly bills"). Thêm ví dụ cụ thể về cách bạn lưu giữ thông tin.

示例: I need to remember several things daily, such as my bank card PIN and to pay monthly bills like electricity and water. For example, I note down due dates in my calendar so I don't miss payments.

建议: Câu trả lời cụt và có lỗi nhỏ (preposition, dư từ). Nên nêu phương pháp chính, dùng liên từ để mở rộng và cho ví dụ cụ thể về cách thực hiện (gửi nhắc, sắp xếp ưu tiên). Giữ dưới 5 câu.

示例: I usually use sticky notes on the fridge and also set reminders on my phone. For important deadlines I create calendar alerts and sometimes use a checklist app so I can tick off tasks as I finish them.

× I used to be a good a person who very good at memorizing things but recently I'm not at goes as good as before due to my workload and study are getting a lot.

✓ I used to be a person who was very good at memorizing things, but recently I'm not doing as well as before because my workload and studies have increased.

The sentence has multiple issues: incorrect articles and noun forms (a good a person -> a person), missing auxiliary verb and wrong verb forms (who very good -> who was very good; not at goes as good -> not doing as well), and incorrect plural noun (study -> studies). Use 'a person', past tense 'was' for a past habit, the fixed expression 'doing as well', and plural 'studies' with 'have increased' to match present perfect. Suggestion: Break into clauses, use correct articles, use 'was' for past description, 'doing as well' for current performance, and pluralize 'studies'.

× I have forgotten uh, my electricity bills one time and it was chaotic that time and I just remember when my mom remind me and she told me not to forget again.

✓ I once forgot my electricity bill and it was chaotic; I only remembered when my mom reminded me, and she told me not to forget again.

Mixes present perfect with simple past and incorrect verb forms: 'have forgotten' is okay but 'one time' fits better with simple past 'forgot'; 'bills' should be singular 'bill' if referring to one instance; 'I just remember' should be past 'I only remembered'; 'mom remind me' should be past 'reminded'. Use consistent past tense for a past event. Suggestion: Use simple past for completed past events, keep verb forms consistent, and choose singular/plural to match context.

× I have to remember my bank card password in my electricity bills and water bills monthly.

✓ I have to remember my bank card password and my electricity and water bill payments every month.

Incorrect preposition 'in' and awkward noun phrase 'electricity bills and water bills monthly'. Use 'and' to connect items and 'every month' or 'monthly' at the end. Also clarify that you remember bill payments rather than inserting password 'in' bills. Suggestion: List items clearly, place time expressions at the end, and use correct prepositions or conjunctions.

× That's some necessary things that I need to remember.

✓ Those are some necessary things that I need to remember.

Mismatch between determiner and noun number: 'That's' (that is) is singular but 'some necessary things' is plural. Use 'Those are' for plural reference. Also 'some necessary things' is acceptable. Suggestion: Ensure demonstrative matches plurality of noun: that/this for singular, those/these for plural.

× I usually use sticky notes and stick them in into the fridge or I have to note the things that I have to remember in my phone and.

✓ I usually use sticky notes and stick them on the fridge, or I note the things I have to remember in my phone.

Incorrect preposition 'in into' and unnecessary repeated auxiliary 'have to' plus dangling 'and' at the end. Use 'stick them on the fridge' (stick + object + on + surface). Prefer simple present 'note' for habitual actions. Remove the trailing 'and'. Suggestion: Use correct prepositions with 'stick' (on/onto), avoid redundant auxiliaries, and complete the sentence without trailing conjunctions.