记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Usa frasi più concise e correggi errori lessicali e d'uso (ad es. "informations" → "information"). Evita riempitivi come "uh" e costruisci una risposta che inizi con una frase tematica chiara, poi aggiungi un dettaglio specifico. Inoltre mantieni la risposta entro 3–4 frasi per suonare naturale ed efficace.

示例: Yes, I'm quite good at memorising. When I was in middle and high school I often memorised chapters and facts for exams, which helped me build strong recall skills. For example, I could remember dates and formulas quickly during tests.

建议: Rispondi direttamente con una frase tematica e fornisci un breve esempio o ammissione se necessario. Evita ripetizioni e costruzioni sbagliate come "I'm forgotten". Se vuoi confrontarti con gli altri, fallo in maniera chiara e sintetica.

示例: No, I can't remember forgetting anything important. I'm generally organised and use reminders, so I haven't missed important appointments. My friends, however, often rely on me to remember shared plans.

建议: Correggi piccoli errori grammaticali e sii più chiaro: elimina parole inutili come "the when" e usa preposizioni corrette ("work at a pizza shop"). Fornisci uno o due dettagli concreti e usa collegamenti brevi per rendere la risposta fluida.

示例: I need to remember when my lessons start and to go to work in the evenings. I work at a small pizza shop and must be there by 7:00, so I always check my schedule and set reminders.

建议: Semplifica la struttura della frase e evita riempitivi come "uh". Usa verbi corretti e più naturali ("tell my mother or father" invece di "say to it to my mother"). Aggiungi un esempio specifico su che tipo di promemoria imposti per rendere la risposta più concreta.

示例: I usually use the calendar on my phone and set alerts to remind me. If I'm still unsure, I tell my mother or father about the event so they can remind me too, for example before a work shift or an important class.

× I memorized a lot of informations and books.

✓ I memorized a lot of information and books.

'Information' is an uncountable noun in English and should not take a plural form. Use 'information' without -s or use a quantifier like 'pieces of information' if countable units are needed.

× So I think I also developed a good memory, uh, thanks to the school years.

✓ So I think I also developed a good memory, thanks to my school years.

The tense 'developed' is past and acceptable, but the phrase needs a possessive modifier. Use 'my school years' to indicate which years are meant. Also remove filler 'uh' in formal answers.

× No, I I don't think so. I'm quite good at memorizing things. As I said, I'm never, it's never happened that I'm forgotten something.

✓ No, I don't think so. I'm quite good at memorizing things. As I said, it has never happened that I forgot something.

Mixed tense and incorrect passive/verb form. 'I'm never' + 'it's never happened' is redundant. Use present perfect 'it has never happened' followed by simple past 'I forgot' to express that the event of forgetting has not occurred. Alternatively: 'I have never forgotten anything.' is more natural.

× My friends are more.

✓ My friends forget things more often than I do.

The original is incomplete and unclear. It lacks a predicate and comparative structure. Provide a full clause with subject, verb and comparative phrase to convey the intended meaning.

× In my daily life I need to remember the when the lesson starts and also to go to work, because every evening I work into a little pizza shop and at 7:00 I have to be there.

✓ In my daily life I need to remember when the lesson starts and also to go to work, because every evening I work in a small pizza shop and at 7:00 I have to be there.

Remove the extraneous definite article 'the' before 'when'. Use the preposition 'in' not 'into' for workplace; 'a little' is better as 'a small' in this context. Also 'remember when the lesson starts' is the correct structure.

× Usually to remember important things, I use the calendar on my phone and if I am not sure, uh, to remember that event, I also say to it to my mother or to my father to be extremely sure.

✓ Usually, to remember important things I use the calendar on my phone, and if I am not sure about an event, I also tell my mother or my father to be absolutely sure.

Incorrect use of infinitive 'to remember' in subordinate clause and wrong verb 'say to it'. Use 'tell' followed by the person. Replace 'to be extremely sure' with 'to be absolutely sure' for natural phrasing. Remove filler 'uh'.