记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Begin with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give one or two concise supporting reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and grammatical mistakes (e.g., tense and articles). Improve cohesion by using connectors such as 'because' and 'since' correctly and reduce filler phrases.

示例: Not really — I’m not as good at memorising things as I used to. Since having a baby, I have less uninterrupted time and get distracted easily, so I often forget small details.

建议: Answer directly, then give a brief explanation of your strategy for avoiding serious forgetfulness. Correct grammar (use gerunds/infinitives and articles) and use a linking word like 'however' or 'but' to contrast ideas.

示例: Not really; however, when something is important I always write it down and set an alarm, so I rarely forget crucial appointments.

建议: Start with a clear topic sentence and expand with one specific example. Use correct verb forms and add a linking phrase to make the answer natural. Avoid repetition by rephrasing.

示例: Mostly I need to remember where I put my phone. For example, I often leave it on the kitchen table and then spend a few minutes searching for it.

建议: Provide a clear topic sentence describing your methods and follow with concise specifics. Correct article use and verb forms, and include a linking word like 'for example' to add clarity. Make the final sentence state the result (prevents forgetting).

示例: I rely on my phone reminders and a small notebook. For example, when I have an appointment I write it down and set a phone alert, which prevents me from missing anything.

× No, I'm not good at memorizing things anymore.

✓ No, I'm not good at memorizing things anymore.

This sentence is correct in tense and form; no change needed. Keep present continuous for current state with 'anymore' to show change over time.

× I used to be better at recalling some things before I had a baby, but since then I often forget things and because I have less time to concentrate.

✓ I used to be better at recalling things before I had a baby, but since then I often forget things because I have less time to concentrate.

Original had redundant conjunctions and awkward structure. 'Used to' correctly expresses past habit (past tense). Remove 'and' before 'because' to avoid a sentence fragment and redundancy. Also omit 'some' which is unnecessary.

× Actually not, although I'm not good at remember something, but it when it comes to important thing I wrote down in my note and I set the alarm not to forget it.

✓ Actually not. Although I'm not good at remembering things, when it comes to important matters I write them down in my notebook and set an alarm so I don't forget them.

Multiple issues: after 'good at' use gerund 'remembering' (verb + -ing). 'Something' should be plural 'things' in general statements. Remove unnecessary 'but it'. Use present simple 'write' and 'set' for habitual actions. Use 'notebook' (one word) and 'so I don't forget them' for correct clause and tense consistency.

× Oh I need to remember where my phone is.

✓ Oh, I need to remember where my phone is.

Sentence is correct; only punctuation improved by adding a comma after 'Oh'. Present simple correctly expresses habitual need.

× I always looking for my phone in my daily life.

✓ I am always looking for my phone in my daily life.

Progressive form needed: 'always looking' requires auxiliary 'am' for 'I am always looking' to indicate repeated irritating action. Alternatively, use 'I always look for my phone' (present simple) for habitual action. Also 'in my daily life' is redundant but acceptable.

× I use reminder and notebook.

✓ I use a reminder and a notebook.

Countable nouns require articles: 'a reminder' and 'a notebook'. Present simple 'use' is correct for habitual action.

× Uh when I have important appointment or something I always write it down my notebook and set a reminder by phone.

✓ When I have an important appointment or something important, I always write it down in my notebook and set a reminder on my phone.

'Appointment' is countable and needs the article 'an'. Insert 'in' before 'my notebook'. Use 'on my phone' or 'set a reminder on my phone' rather than 'by phone'. Keep present simple for habitual actions.

× It's help me missing something.

✓ It helps me avoid missing something.

'It' requires third person singular verb 'helps' (third person singular issue). Use 'avoid missing' to express prevention; 'missing something' alone is awkward. Keep present simple for habitual effect.