记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“forgot”应为“forget”，“share”应为“write down”。建议注意时态和词汇的准确使用，同时回答可以更简洁自然。

示例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. I often forget my belongings when I go out, so I usually write down important things in my notes to remind myself what to do next.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，如“for intention”不合适，句子结尾不完整。建议使用正确的表达方式，并补充完整的句子，使回答更连贯。

示例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. One year, I completely forgot my brother's birthday because I was very busy with work. I felt really bad about it and tried to make it up to him later.

建议: 回答表达了主要内容，但句子结构不完整且有语法错误，如“which is,”后面缺少内容。建议注意句子完整性和逻辑连贯性。

示例: I need to remember to study Russian every day because I have an important exam in a few months. Getting the certification is crucial for my future career, so I have to keep practicing regularly.

建议: 这段回答中有严重的语法和表达错误，部分句子无法理解。建议加强基础语法学习，使用简单清晰的句子表达，并避免拼写错误。

示例: To remember important things, I usually write down notes on my phone or in a notebook to help me organize my day. Additionally, I make it a habit to check my notes every morning to make sure I don't forget anything.

× I often forgot my case when I go outside, so I often share something important down on my note to remind me what to do next.

✓ I often forget my case when I go outside, so I often write something important down on my note to remind me what to do next.

句中使用了过去时态 'forgot'，但描述的是经常发生的事情，应使用一般现在时 'forget'。另外，动词 'share' 用错，应为 'write'，表示写下笔记。

× I often forgot my case when I go outside, so I often share something important down on my note to remind me what to do next.

✓ I often forget my case when I go outside, so I often write something important down on my note to remind me what to do next.

动词 'share' 在此处用法不当，应使用 'write' 来表达写下笔记的意思。

× Yes, I have forgotten something important before for intention.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important before intentionally.

句中 'for intention' 用法错误，应使用副词 'intentionally' 来表达有意地忘记。

× That's the year I completely forgot my brother's birthday because I was very busy about my work.

✓ That's the year I completely forgot my brother's birthday because I was very busy with my work.

介词 'about' 用错，描述忙于某事应使用 'busy with'。

× I feel extremely bad about it and tried to make up for him and.

✓ I felt extremely bad about it and tried to make it up to him.

时态应统一为过去时 'felt'，短语 'make up for him' 应为 'make it up to him'，且句尾多余的 'and' 应删除。

× I need to remember to study Russian language because I have an important exam in a few months, which is, and I need to get a certification which is very important in my future career, so I need to keep practicing.

✓ I need to remember to study the Russian language because I have an important exam in a few months, and I need to get a certification which is very important for my future career, so I need to keep practicing.

句中缺少定冠词 'the' 修饰 'Russian language'，连接词使用不当，'which is,' 应删除或改为 'and'，介词 'in my future career' 应为 'for my future career'。

× For me, they're sorry fatty waste. She remember important things.

✓ For me, there are some effective ways to remember important things.

原句中 'they're sorry fatty waste' 无意义，且 'She remember' 主谓不一致，应改为 'there are some effective ways' 和 'remember' 的正确形式。

× I often share down some important texts either in my phone or on my book which organize my day better.

✓ I often write down some important texts either on my phone or in my book which help me organize my day better.

动词 'share down' 用法错误，应为 'write down'；介词 'in my phone' 应为 'on my phone'，'on my book' 应为 'in my book'；缺少主语 'which help me'。

× And additionally I make it a habit to check my remember every morning to ensure I don't forget.

✓ And additionally, I make it a habit to check my reminders every morning to ensure I don't forget.

'my remember' 用词错误，应为复数名词 'my reminders'，表示提醒事项。