记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，句子结构不完整，且内容重复。建议使用完整句子，避免重复表达，并尝试用更自然的表达方式。

示例: No, I am not very good at memorising things. Since I was a child, I have found it difficult and boring to memorise facts or formulas, especially in subjects like math.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，且内容不连贯。建议使用正确的时态和完整句子，避免重复，并补充细节使内容更具体。

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, I forgot my room keys three times in the past six months when I went out to take out the rubbish. It was very embarrassing, and I had to ask for help each time.

建议: 回答表达基本清晰，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如'deforest'应为'defrost'。建议注意词汇准确性，并使用连贯的句子结构。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember when to cook. For example, before cooking, I have to defrost the meat and wash the rice, then cook it in the cooker. So, I need to manage my time carefully to finish these tasks.

建议: 回答中表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，且有语法错误。建议使用更清晰的句子，避免不相关的信息，突出记忆方法。

示例: Usually, I write important things in my memo or on paper. Sometimes, when I am lying in bed at night, ideas suddenly pop into my mind, so I quickly write them down to remember.

× No, I don't think I'm good at memorizing anything. Since I was a child.

✓ No, I don't think I'm good at memorizing anything since I was a child.

“Since I was a child”是一个时间状语从句，不能单独成句，应该和前面的句子合并，形成完整的句子。

× It's really hard for me or it's really boring for me to memorize in the knowledge or the formulations in the math.

✓ It's really hard for me or it's really boring for me to memorize the knowledge or the formulas in math.

“memorize”后面不需要介词“in”，而且“formulations”应改为“formulas”更符合数学术语。

× I had forgot my keys of my room for three times within half an year.

✓ I forgot my room keys three times within half a year.

“had forgot”是错误的过去完成时形式，正确应为“forgot”。“for three times”应改为“three times”。“of my room”表达不自然，改为“my room keys”。“half an year”应为“half a year”。

× So it's really embarrassing and I need I always ask for help from my.

✓ So it's really embarrassing and I always need to ask for help from others.

句子结构混乱，“I need I always ask”不正确，应改为“I always need to ask”。“from my”不完整，应为“from others”。

× Before I cooking I need to deforest the meat and maybe wash the rice and cook it in the cooker.

✓ Before I cook, I need to defrost the meat and maybe wash the rice and cook it in the cooker.

“Before I cooking”中“cooking”应为动词原形“cook”。“deforest”应为“defrost”，意思是解冻。

× Usually I will write it in my memo and sometimes I will also write it in the paper.

✓ Usually I will write it in my memo and sometimes I will also write it on paper.

“write in the paper”应改为“write on paper”，因为写在纸上用介词“on”。

× Maybe I was stopped by a sports specific sport in my dissertation and while lying in my bed, idea suddenly pop up in my mind, so I will quickly write down in the paper.

✓ Maybe I was stopped by a specific sport in my dissertation, and while lying in my bed, an idea suddenly popped up in my mind, so I quickly wrote it down on paper.

句子结构混乱，时态不一致。“idea”前应加冠词“an”。“pop up”应为过去式“popped up”。“write down in the paper”应为“wrote it down on paper”。