名字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly, then give one clear reason or example. Correct the phrase “I don't think so that” to “I don't think,” and avoid repeating or restarting phrases such as “they are understand, they understand.” Finish your answer with a complete sentence.

示例: No, I find it quite difficult to remember people's names. I sometimes forget them shortly after meeting someone, but most people understand if I politely ask them to remind me.

建议: Your strategy of making associations is relevant, but explain it with a specific example. Use “a person tells me” or “someone tells me,” and reduce fillers such as “uh.” Link your ideas smoothly instead of starting a new sentence with “And.”

示例: When someone tells me their name, I repeat it once in the conversation. I also try to connect it with something familiar, such as a person or a place, because that makes it easier to remember.

建议: State your feeling clearly and explain why. Use “To be honest,” not “To be honestly,” and complete the idea about understanding other people; the current response is difficult to follow and contains unfinished repetitions.

示例: To be honest, I don't mind much when people forget my name. I sometimes forget other people's names too, so I understand that it can happen unintentionally.

建议: Give a clear answer and clarify the contrast you are trying to make. “If it is about friendship” is unclear here, and the final clause is incomplete. Explain whether names are easier to remember in formal or informal situations, and give a brief reason.

示例: I don't forget names very often, but it depends on the situation. I find them easier to remember in a serious meeting because people introduce themselves formally, whereas I may forget names at a casual social gathering.

× I don't think so that they will be offended by me.

✓ I don't think that they will be offended by me.

In this sentence, so is not needed before that. Use I don't think that to introduce the clause expressing what you believe.

× because they are understand, they understand

✓ because they understand

Understand is a main verb and does not take are in the simple present. Use they understand. The repeated phrase is a self-correction and can be omitted.

× And it.

✓ Remove this fragment, or complete it with a verb, such as And it is difficult.

The phrase it has no verb, so it is not a complete sentence. Add a verb or omit the fragment.

× When a person tell me his name, I'll always try to remember it.

✓ When a person tells me his name, I'll always try to remember it.

A person is third-person singular, so the present-tense verb in the when-clause needs the -s ending: tells.

× To be honestly, I don't care about it.

✓ To be honest, I don't care about it.

After to be, use the adjective honest to describe the speaker's state or manner. Honestly is an adverb.

× I understand that people because I always do. Same. The same, OK.

✓ I understand, because I do the same.

That introduces a subordinate clause, but the clause that people is incomplete. The intended meaning can be expressed with because I do the same. The repeated fragments Same and The same can be removed.

× If it is about friendship, it is so easy to forget the name, but it is if it is about serious conversation.

✓ If it is about friendship, it is easy to forget a name, but it is harder if it is about a serious conversation.

The second clause is incomplete because it is has no complement describing what it is like. Harder supplies the missing description and expresses the contrast suggested by but. Use a before the singular countable noun conversation.