名字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Ответ начинается прямо и выражает понятную мысль, но последняя фраза обрывается и мешает пониманию. Используйте корректное выражение «when I meet someone new» и добавьте одну конкретную причину, почему имена трудно запоминать. Избегайте слов-паразитов и не повторяйте мысль «это трудно» разными способами.

示例: Honestly, I find it quite difficult to remember people's names. I often forget them shortly after meeting someone new, especially if I meet several people at once.

建议: Вы называете подходящий способ, но соедините идеи с помощью связки, например «by», и избегайте грамматической ошибки «it's really helps» — правильно «it really helps». Сделайте ответ более естественным и добавьте конкретный пример ассоциации.

示例: I usually remember names by making associations. For example, I might connect someone's name with a familiar person or something distinctive about them. That really helps me recall it later.

建议: Ответ передаёт, что вы не обижаетесь, но выражение «I know how to not to remember the name» неестественно и не объясняет вашу реакцию. Скажите прямо, что вы понимаете такую ситуацию, поскольку сами иногда забываете имена. Используйте правильную форму «if someone asks» и завершите ответ полной фразой.

示例: I don't mind too much because I sometimes forget people's names as well. If someone asks me to repeat my name, I just say it again and carry on with the conversation.

建议: Вы отвечаете на вопрос и объясняете, как справляетесь с проблемой, но формулировка «it happens sometimes with me» звучит неестественно; лучше сказать «I sometimes forget people's names». Также фраза о способе запоминания повторяет предыдущий ответ. Сократите повтор и приведите один конкретный пример ассоциации.

示例: Yes, I sometimes forget people's names, especially when I meet a lot of people at once. I try to connect a name with something memorable, such as the person's job or a distinctive feature.

× Uh, when I meet someone you.

✓ I struggle to remember people’s names whenever I meet someone new.

The phrase when I meet someone you is incomplete and the pronoun you does not fit the intended meaning. Use someone new to describe the person you meet, and form a complete sentence.

× I usually make some associations try to connect people's names with something and it's really helps me.

✓ I usually make associations to connect people's names with something, and it really helps me.

The verbs make and try are joined without a clear grammatical link. Use the infinitive to connect to show the purpose of making associations. The corrected sentence also removes the unnecessary contraction in it’s really helps; it should be it really helps.

× It's absolutely normal situation because I know how to not to remember the name.

✓ It’s a completely normal situation because I know what it’s like to forget a name.

Normal situation is a singular countable noun phrase and needs the article a. The phrase how to not to remember is also incorrectly formed and unclear; what it’s like to forget expresses the intended meaning naturally.

× If someone ask me my name again, I just, uh, can uh, repeat it and.

✓ If someone asks me my name again, I can just repeat it.

Someone is a singular subject, so the present-tense verb needs the third-person singular ending -s: asks. The original ending with and is unfinished, so remove it to make the sentence complete.

× Yeah, it happens sometimes with me and uh, if I have some problems with it, I have to make some associations with names, connect it with something and, uh, try to remember.

✓ Yeah, it happens to me sometimes, and if I have some problems with it, I have to make associations with names, connect them with something, and try to remember.

Use happens to me, not happens with me, when describing something that occurs to a person. To refer to the plural noun names, use the pronoun them rather than it.