名字— Part 1 评分报告

练习Part12026-10-27 21:04:14

对话

Part 1

考官

Is it easy for you to remember people's names?

考生

Remembering others name isn't hard for me. For name meet a person two or three times, I can remember it. Or if a name sounds special, I can remember it instantly.

考官

How do you remember people's names?

考生

Nothing special, I usually add notes which had contacts and I try to link other faces with their names. In addition, minis behind the names also helps me to remember.

考官

How do you feel when people can't remember your name?

考生

When people forget my name, I don't mind at all. I will remind others gently because everybody forget others' names from time to time.

考官

Do you often forget people's names?

考生

Oh yeah, I sometimes forgot others' names, especially when I miss a big group at school or work. It's too tough to remember so many names all at once.

评估

总分

总分: 5.0流畅度与连贯性: 5.5发音: 5.0语法: 5.0词汇: 5.0

Part 1

Is it easy for you to remember people's names?

分数: 62.0

建议: 你直接回答了问题,也给出了重复见面和名字特别这两个理由。不过,第一句应说“other people's names”;第二句“ For name meet a person”表达不清楚,可以改为“After meeting someone two or three times”。注意 names 是复数,后文代词也要与之对应。可以把两种情况连起来,让回答更自然流畅。

示例: It's usually quite easy for me to remember people's names. After meeting someone two or three times, I can normally remember their name. I also tend to remember unusual names straight away.

How do you remember people's names?

分数: 48.0

建议: 你提到了记笔记和把人脸与名字联系起来,内容方向合适,但有几处表达不清。“add notes which had contacts”可改为“make a note in my contacts”;“link other faces”应表达为“match people's faces with their names”。最后的“minis behind the names”无法清楚传达意思;如果你想说名字的含义,可以说“the meaning behind a name”。注意主谓一致,例如“the meaning ... helps”。

示例: I usually make a note of someone's name in my contacts after we meet. I also try to match their face with their name, especially if we work or study together. If a name has an interesting meaning, that can make it easier to remember as well.

How do you feel when people can't remember your name?

分数: 77.0

建议: 回答直接,态度明确,也给出了合理解释。注意时态和主谓一致:描述常见情况时,可以说“I gently remind them”;“everybody forget others' names”应改为“everyone forgets other people's names”。为了让表达更自然,可以补充一个简短的具体说法,例如直接告诉对方自己的名字。

示例: I don't mind if someone forgets my name. I just gently remind them, especially if we've only met once or twice. It happens to everyone from time to time.

Do you often forget people's names?

分数: 61.0

建议: 你回答了自己有时会忘记名字,并说明了原因,内容相关。不过,谈论习惯时应使用一般现在时“forget”,而不是“forgot”。“when I miss a big group”意思不清楚;如果你想表达一次认识很多人,可以说“when I meet a large group of people”。最后一句可以保留,也可以加一个具体场景来展开。

示例: Yes, I sometimes forget people's names, especially when I meet a large group of people at school or work. It's difficult to remember everyone's name after just one introduction. I usually remember them more easily after I've spoken to them a few times.

语法

1: Singular and plural issue

× Remembering others name isn't hard for me.

✓ Remembering other people's names isn't hard for me.

这里要表达“别人的名字”,应使用所有格 people’s;people 是复数名词,其所有格是 people’s,后面的 name 也应使用复数 names。

26: Sentence structure errors

× For name meet a person two or three times, I can remember it.

✓ If I meet a person two or three times, I can remember their name.

原句开头的“For name meet”缺少正确的句子结构,无法构成条件从句。表达“如果我和一个人见过两三次”,应使用“If I meet...”;补出 their name 可明确说明记住的内容。

6: Present tense issue

× Nothing special, I usually add notes which had contacts and I try to link other faces with their names.

✓ Nothing special; I usually add notes which have contacts, and I try to link other faces with their names.

usually 表示习惯性行为,句子使用一般现在时,因此 which 后的动词应为 have,而不是表示过去的 had。

27: Subject-verb agreement errors

× In addition, minis behind the names also helps me to remember.

✓ In addition, minis behind the names also help me to remember.

主语 minis 是复数,谓语动词不能使用第三人称单数形式 helps,应改为 help,使主谓保持一致。

2: Third person singular issue

× I will remind others gently because everybody forget others' names from time to time.

✓ I will remind others gently because everybody forgets others' names from time to time.

everybody 是表示单数意义的不定代词,因此一般现在时的谓语动词要加 -s,forget 应改为 forgets。

5: Past tense issue

× Oh yeah, I sometimes forgot others' names, especially when I miss a big group at school or work.

✓ Oh yeah, I sometimes forget others' names, especially when I miss a big group at school or work.

sometimes 表示经常发生的习惯,回答“How often”类问题时应使用一般现在时。forgot 是过去式,应改为 forget。

重点词汇

Big— Large; Elder; Important; Ambitious
Hard— Firm; Arduous; Difficult; Harsh; Strict
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Special— Exceptional; Distinctive; Momentous; Specific
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