名字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly, then explain the reason. Use the natural expression “draw a blank” rather than “draw a bank,” and remove the unrelated final word. Make the connection between feeling nervous and forgetting names clear.

示例: No, I find it quite difficult to remember people's names. I sometimes draw a blank when I meet someone new. I think it's because I get nervous and focus more on the conversation than on their name.

建议: Your strategy is relevant and specific, but avoid repeating words such as “by repeating” and correct “dis distinctive” to “distinctive.” Keep the sentence structure consistent by saying you repeat the name and link it to a feature.

示例: I usually remember someone's name by repeating it aloud a couple of times when we first meet. I also link it to a distinctive feature, such as their hairstyle or job.

建议: State your feelings using natural phrases such as “a little offended” or “embarrassed.” Correct “it makes me thinks” to “it makes me think,” and tell the example clearly without the false start.

示例: I feel a little offended and embarrassed when people can't remember my name because it makes me think they weren't paying attention. At a party once, I had to introduce myself several times, and I felt a bit ignored.

建议: Give a clear direct answer using “I often forget” or “I don't often forget.” The rest of the response is difficult to understand; try adding one simple reason or memory strategy, and avoid unfinished phrases.

示例: Yes, I often forget people's names, especially when I meet several people at once. I try to remember them by connecting each name with the person's job or appearance.

× I usually remember people's names by repeating by repeating the name aloud a couple of times when I first meet them and link it to a dis distinctive features such as their hairstyles or job for example.

✓ I usually remember people's names by repeating the name aloud a couple of times when I first meet them and linking it to distinctive features such as their hairstyles or jobs, for example.

After by, use a verb in the -ing form. The coordinated verbs should therefore be repeating and linking. The repeated phrase and the false start dis have also been removed. Use jobs to make the plural list consistent with hairstyles.

× I usually remember people's names by repeating by repeating the name aloud a couple of times when I first meet them and link it to a dis distinctive features such as their hairstyles or job for example.

✓ I usually remember people's names by repeating the name aloud a couple of times when I first meet them and linking it to distinctive features such as their hairstyles or jobs, for example.

Features is plural, so it should not be preceded by the singular article a. Remove a, and use plural nouns consistently in the examples, such as hairstyles and jobs.

× I feel a little off dent and embrace it when people cannot remember my name because it makes me thinks they aren't paying attention.

✓ I feel a little off dent and embrace it when people cannot remember my name because it makes me think they aren't paying attention.

After the causative verb makes and its object me, use the base form of the next verb: think, not thinks. The words off dent and embrace appear unclear, so they have not been changed because their intended meanings cannot be determined from the transcript.

× Yes, I am forget. I am often forget people's names then I am I recall him some read some job and plays or.

✓ Yes, I often forget people's names.

Forget is a main verb, so it cannot follow am in these sentences. Use the simple present to describe a usual habit: I often forget. The remainder of the sentence is too garbled to correct reliably.