名字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Responde directamente y corrige la expresión: se dice “people’s names”, no “person names”. Después, añade una razón clara y concreta. Revisa la estructura de la oración y evita palabras que no expresen tu idea.

示例: Yes, it’s usually easy for me to remember people’s names because I pay attention when I meet them. I also try to connect each name with the person’s face.

建议: Explica el método en una secuencia sencilla: primero qué haces al conocer a alguien y luego cómo refuerzas el recuerdo. Usa estructuras claras como “I look at…” y “I try to remember…”, y añade un detalle específico.

示例: I look carefully at the person’s face and repeat their name during the conversation. I also connect the name with where we met, which helps me remember it later.

建议: La respuesta no deja claro cómo te sientes ni por qué. Empieza con una emoción directa, por ejemplo “I don’t mind” o “I feel a little disappointed”, y explica brevemente tu reacción. Usa vocabulario preciso y evita repetir palabras.

示例: I don’t mind too much when people forget my name. It happens sometimes, and I usually just tell them again with a smile.

建议: Contesta directamente con “No, I rarely do” y explica cómo evitas olvidar los nombres. Puedes mencionar que prestas atención al nombre o que lo relacionas con un rasgo de la persona. Usa conectores como “because” y revisa la gramática para que la idea sea fácil de entender.

示例: No, I rarely forget people’s names because I pay close attention when I’m introduced to someone. I also associate each name with the person’s face or a distinctive feature.

× Yes, I easily remember person names because enjoy people's know bury

✓ Yes, I can easily remember people's names because I enjoy getting to know people.

The clause after because is incomplete because it has no subject, and the phrase after enjoy is not grammatically formed. Use a subject such as I after because, and use a gerund after enjoy, as in enjoy getting to know people. Also use the plural possessive people's names when referring to names belonging to people.

× I remember I look face the people I remember the situation under the frame list

✓ I remember people's names by looking at their faces and remembering the situation in which I met them.

The original contains several clauses without clear grammatical connections, and look face is not a well-formed phrase. Use by followed by a gerund to explain how you remember something, and connect the two actions with and. Use the preposition at after look and a complete relative phrase such as the situation in which I met them.

× I am very happy Soon of people is aggregu and friendly friendly ease

✓ I am very happy. Some people are agreeable and friendly.

The original does not form complete, clearly connected clauses. Some people is the correct subject phrase, and it takes the plural verb are. Use a period to separate the complete thought I am very happy from the statement about people.

× No, I watch your things that people is easy remember to name And well remember the characteristic the people

✓ No, I pay attention to things that make it easy to remember people's names, and I remember people's characteristics well.

The original has unclear clause structure, and the phrase people is easy remember lacks a grammatical construction. Use make it easy to remember, followed by the object people's names. Connect the final clause with and, and use well to describe how you remember.