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Part 1

考官

Is it easy for you to remember people's names?

考生

Yes, it really seems to me. For example, when I met a person for the first time, and then the second time I also remembered their names.

考官

How do you remember people's names?

考生

Um, infest I don't know a way to remember Daniel I just add what's your name then to say I remember

考官

How do you feel when people can't remember your name?

考生

I don't think that of Robins just they remember anything else.

考官

Do you often forget people's names?

考生

No, I just forgot them not forgot their names

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总分: 5.0流畅度与连贯性: 5.0发音: 5.0语法: 5.0词汇: 5.0

Part 1

Is it easy for you to remember people's names?

分数: 58.0

建议: Câu trả lời trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng cách diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên, đặc biệt là “it really seems to me” và “when I met... and then...”. Em nên dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn: trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó đưa ra lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể. Hãy chú ý dùng thì quá khứ đúng khi kể về lần gặp đầu tiên và tránh lặp từ “time”.

示例: Yes, I’m quite good at remembering people’s names. I usually remember a name after meeting someone once or twice. I also try to use the person’s name during the conversation, which helps me remember it.

How do you remember people's names?

分数: 25.0

建议: Câu trả lời hiện chưa rõ nghĩa và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu phương pháp ghi nhớ tên. Em nên trả lời trực tiếp bằng một cách cụ thể, chẳng hạn như lặp lại tên của người đó, liên tưởng tên với khuôn mặt hoặc ghi chú lại. Cần sử dụng linking words như “also” hoặc “because” để nối các ý và tránh những từ không rõ nghĩa như “infest”.

示例: I usually repeat the person’s name during our conversation. For example, I might say, “Nice to meet you, Daniel,” and then use the name again before we say goodbye. If the name is unusual, I try to associate it with the person’s appearance.

How do you feel when people can't remember your name?

分数: 18.0

建议: Câu trả lời chưa thể hiện rõ cảm xúc của em và có nhiều từ bị dùng sai hoặc phát âm/ghi âm không rõ, chẳng hạn như “Robins”. Em nên nêu cảm xúc trực tiếp trước, ví dụ “I feel a little disappointed” hoặc “I don’t mind”, rồi giải thích ngắn gọn lý do. Một ví dụ cụ thể sẽ giúp câu trả lời tự nhiên và đầy đủ hơn.

示例: I feel a little disappointed when someone forgets my name, especially if we have met several times. However, I understand that some people are not good at remembering names. I usually remind them politely instead of taking it personally.

Do you often forget people's names?

分数: 38.0

建议: Câu trả lời có ý trả lời là “không”, nhưng phần sau bị mâu thuẫn và sai cấu trúc ngữ pháp. Em nên nói rõ “I don’t often forget people’s names” và có thể thêm lý do hoặc tình huống ngoại lệ. Hãy phân biệt “forget” ở hiện tại và “forgot” ở quá khứ; sau “don’t” cần dùng động từ nguyên mẫu “forget”.

示例: No, I don’t often forget people’s names. I usually remember them if I have had a proper conversation with someone. However, I sometimes forget a name when I meet many new people at the same time.

语法

26: Sentence structure errors

× Yes, it really seems to me.

✓ Yes, I think so.

The original sentence is not grammatically complete or natural because seems requires a clear subject and complement. Use I think so to give a natural answer to the yes/no question.

6: Present tense issue

× For example, when I met a person for the first time, and then the second time I also remembered their names.

✓ For example, when I meet someone for the first time, I can remember their name when I meet them again.

The question asks about a usual experience, so the present tense meet is more appropriate than the past tense met. Someone and their name are also more natural and grammatically consistent than a person and their names in this context.

24: Direct and indirect speech errors

× Um, infest I don't know a way to remember Daniel I just add what's your name then to say I remember

✓ Um, in fact, I do not know how to remember people's names. I just ask, 'What's your name?' and then try to remember it.

The original sentence incorrectly combines several ideas without punctuation or a clear structure. The question What's your name? is direct speech, so it should be introduced with a reporting verb such as ask and enclosed in quotation marks. In fact is also the correct expression, not infest.

26: Sentence structure errors

× I don't think that of Robins just they remember anything else.

✓ I don't think about it; I just think they remember something else.

The original sentence has an incorrect word order and an incomplete phrase after think. The correct structure is think about it. The second idea needs a clear subject and verb: I just think they remember something else.

6: Present tense issue

× No, I just forgot them not forgot their names

✓ No, I just forget their names, not the people themselves.

Because the question asks about a usual habit with Do you often..., use the present tense forget instead of the past tense forgot. The sentence also needs a clearer contrast: their names, not the people themselves.

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