名字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer the question directly and complete your sentence. Avoid saying that you remember names because you are “an intelligent person,” as this sounds unnatural and does not explain your method. Give a clear reason and, if possible, a brief example. For instance, you could mention that you repeat a person's name or associate it with their appearance.

示例: Yes, I’m usually quite good at remembering people’s names because I repeat the name in my head when I first meet someone. I also try to use it during the conversation, which helps me remember it more easily.

建议: Use a clear topic sentence followed by one or two supporting details. Avoid repetition, such as “his name of his name,” and use accurate grammar: “see someone two or three times” and “chat with them.” Explain the process in a logical order and use a linking word such as “also.”

示例: I usually remember someone’s name after meeting them two or three times. I repeat their name during the conversation and try to chat with them again later. This helps me connect the name with their face and personality.

建议: Express one clear feeling and explain why. “Noisy” is not the correct word in this context; use “annoying,” “disappointing,” or “a little hurtful.” Avoid repeated and unfinished phrases, and replace “It makes me feel nothing” with a specific reaction. You can include a short example, but keep the answer to no more than five sentences.

示例: I feel a little disappointed when someone cannot remember my name, especially after we have met several times. It makes me feel that they were not paying attention during our previous conversations. However, I usually remind them politely instead of getting upset.

建议: Your main idea is relevant, but avoid repeating “because” and “Sunday to Thursday.” Use a more natural expression such as “I attend school from Sunday to Thursday.” Correct “That days” to “On those days,” and finish with a concise conclusion instead of “that’s a good point.” Add a specific reason explaining how frequent contact helps you remember names.

示例: No, not usually. I attend school from Sunday to Thursday, so I see most of my classmates almost every day. Because we spend so much time together, I quickly remember their names and rarely forget them.

× Yes, of course, because I am an intelligent person and this is my

✓ Yes, of course, because I am an intelligent person, and I am good at remembering people's names.

The sentence is incomplete because 'this is my' requires a noun or noun phrase after 'my'. Complete the idea with a suitable expression, such as 'I am good at remembering people's names.'

× Like when I see this person for two or three times, I remember his name of his name and by meeting him and have chatted him.

✓ When I see a person two or three times, I remember their name by meeting them and chatting with them.

Do not use 'for' before a number of occasions when describing how many times something happens. Say 'two or three times'. Also, 'chat' is followed by the preposition 'with', so use 'chatting with them'.

× Like when I see this person for two or three times, I remember his name of his name and by meeting him and have chatted him.

✓ When I see a person two or three times, I remember their name by meeting them and chatting with them.

After the preposition 'by', use the verb in the -ing form. Therefore, 'have chatted' should be changed to 'chatting'. The correct structure is 'by meeting them and chatting with them.'

× When I meet someone four times then he say when he says when he tells me um don't watch you I don't know what your name.

✓ When I meet someone four times, they say that they do not know my name.

With the singular third-person subject 'he' or 'she', the present-tense verb must be 'says', not 'say'. Using the singular pronoun 'they' is also natural when the person's gender is unknown; in that case, use 'say'.

× When I meet someone four times then he say when he says when he tells me um don't watch you I don't know what your name.

✓ When I meet someone four times, they say that they do not know my name.

The original sentence mixes several incomplete versions of direct and indirect speech. For indirect speech, use 'say that' followed by a complete clause. Because the person is talking about the speaker's name, 'your name' should become 'my name' in the reported version.

× That days I see them so I don't forget their names and that's a good point.

✓ On those days, I see them, so I do not forget their names, and that is a good point.

Use the plural demonstrative 'those' with the plural noun 'days'. The phrase 'on those days' is the natural prepositional expression for referring to specific days.

× No, not really because I see them daily from Sunday to Thursday because I live in Qatar and school stuff from Sunday to Thursday.

✓ No, not really. I see them every day from Sunday to Thursday because I live in Qatar, and school runs from Sunday to Thursday.

The clause 'school stuff from Sunday to Thursday' has no verb, so it is not a complete clause. Use a verb such as 'runs' to form the complete clause 'school runs from Sunday to Thursday.'