名字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan kejelasan. Jawaban Anda harus dimulai dengan kalimat topik yang jelas, misalnya menyatakan apakah Anda mudah mengingat nama. Tambahkan detail spesifik menggunakan kata penghubung (because/when) untuk menjelaskan alasan. Hindari pengulangan dan batasi jawaban sampai 3-4 kalimat.

示例: Yes, it's quite easy for me to remember people's names when I meet them every day, because repetition helps me associate their faces with their names. For example, I remember my classmates' names easily since I see them in every lesson.

建议: Perbaiki susunan kalimat dan kosakata. Mulailah dengan topik (I usually...), lalu jelaskan metode spesifik dengan kata penghubung (for example/so). Sebutkan langkah nyata (repeat name, save contact, use social media) agar lebih jelas dan konkret.

示例: I usually try to repeat the person's name right after they introduce themselves and then save their contact on my phone. For example, I often add new acquaintances on WhatsApp or Facebook so I can see their name and photo later.

建议: Perbaiki kelancaran dan kejelasan ide. Jawab langsung (I don't mind...) lalu jelaskan alasan menggunakan linking words (because/since). Hindari frasa tidak selesai dan perbaiki tata bahasa agar terdengar natural dan efektif.

示例: I don't mind when people forget my name, especially if we've only met a few times, because I know not everyone has a good memory. If it happens often, I might gently remind them to help them remember.

建议: Jelaskan frekuensi dengan lebih spesifik dan gunakan struktur yang lebih jelas (Yes, I often... because...). Tambahkan contoh konkret dan kata penghubung untuk koherensi. Perbaiki kosakata (e.g., "meet" dan "add friends on social media").

示例: Yes, I often forget people's names if I only meet them once and don't add them on social media. For example, I might meet someone at a conference and forget their name a week later because I didn't save their contact.

× Yes is it easy for me if the people are routine meet with me every day

✓ Yes, it is easy for me if people I know meet me every day.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and extra words. The subject and verb need 'it is' and 'people I know' replaces 'the people are routine'. 'Meet me every day' is the correct verb phrase. Improve by using correct English word order: subject + verb + object and reduce redundant words.

× For the first after introdis self with me, maybe we will edit friends at Facebook or get contact WhatsApp.

✓ At first, after introducing themselves to me, maybe we will add each other as friends on Facebook or exchange WhatsApp contact details.

Multiple issues: 'introdis self' is incorrect form; use 'introducing themselves' (present participle) to indicate the action. 'Edit friends' is wrong; use 'add each other as friends'. 'Get contact WhatsApp' should be 'exchange WhatsApp contact details'. Keep logical sequence and correct verb forms.

× No problem if only several times meet with me because sometimes not at all people have a good memory. So I mean it's no problem but

✓ It's no problem if we meet only a few times because not everyone has a good memory. So I mean it's not a problem.

Pronoun and word choice errors: 'several times meet with me' should be 'we meet only a few times'. 'Not at all people' is ungrammatical; use 'not everyone'. Also finish the sentence clearly. Improve by using appropriate pronouns and clearer expressions.

× Yes I do. I often forget people's name because only once I meet with me and not Edit friends in social media or say words

✓ Yes, I do. I often forget people's names because I met them only once, did not add them as friends on social media, or did not exchange contact details.

'People's name' should be plural 'people's names'. The clause 'only once I meet with me' is incorrect; use 'I met them only once'. 'Edit friends' is wrong; use 'add them as friends'. Use past tense 'met' to match context. Improve by fixing plural forms and correct verbs.