工作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答は明確で要点を押さえていますが、いくつかの点で改善できます。具体的には冠詞（a/an/the）の使い方、職場名の前の前置詞、語順の自然さを直しましょう。また短いが詳細を一つ追加して情報を少し豊かにするとより良い印象になります。話し方は5文以内に収め、繰り返しやためらいを避ける練習をしてください。

示例: I work as an administrative assistant at the Patent Office. I support the staff with various administrative tasks and paperwork, such as scheduling meetings and preparing documents.

建议: 文法と前置詞の誤り（"at in"や"transport connection"）、語順、発音のためらいが目立ちます。自然な表現では前置詞を一つにし、名詞の形や複数形を正しく使いましょう。理由を述べるときは接続詞（because/so）を論理的に使い、具体的な例（駅や路線名）を一つ入れると説得力が増します。

示例: I work in central Osaka, which is very convenient because several train lines meet near my office, so my colleagues and I can get around the city easily.

建议: 回答は肯定的ですが話が途中で切れて冗長なため説得力が低いです。接続詞を使って理由をまとめ、具体的な利点（駅直結、快適な設備、通勤時間の短さなど）を2つまで挙げて簡潔に述べてください。無駄なフィラー（uh）を減らす練習も必要です。

示例: Yes, it is. Our office is directly connected to a train station, so I don't need an umbrella on rainy days, and the building has comfortable facilities that make the workplace pleasant.

建议: 文法（I satisfied → I am satisfied／present → current）、語順、意味の明確さが欠けています。否定表現の誤用（don't want to work any place）を直し、なぜ気に入っているか具体的な理由（新しい設備、働きやすさ、雰囲気）を1〜2点挙げて自然に結論づけてください。

示例: I'm very satisfied with my current office because the building is new and modern. It has a pleasant atmosphere and good facilities, so I prefer to stay there.

建议: 内容が曖昧で文が断片的です。将来の計画がないと述べるなら、その理由や今後すべきこと（契約終了に伴う準備、転職活動の予定、スキルアップなど）を具体的に述べると良いです。文法（contract is finished → will finish／I have to plan move → I need to plan to move）と動詞の形を直してください。

示例: I don't have definite long-term plans yet, but my contract will finish next year, so I need to start planning to move to a new company. For example, I'll update my CV and begin applying for positions in my field.

× I work as an administrative assistant at Patent Office where I support the staff with administrative tasks and paperwork.

✓ I work as an administrative assistant at the Patent Office, where I support the staff with administrative tasks and paperwork.

Missing definite article before a specific institution: 'Patent Office' refers to a particular office, so use 'the'. Also add a comma before 'where' to link clauses clearly.

× I work at in central Osaka, which is quite convenient because there are several, uh transport connection with station, so people can easy to around.

✓ I work in central Osaka, which is quite convenient because there are several transport connections to stations, so people can easily get around.

Use 'in' for locations like 'central Osaka' not 'at in'. 'Transport connections' needs plural. Use 'to' for connection to stations. Use adverb 'easily' and the verb phrase 'get around'. Remove extra filler words.

× Yes, it is because, uh, our office connected to a train station.

✓ Yes, it is, because our office is connected to a train station.

Missing auxiliary 'is' for passive/adjective construction: 'connected' needs 'is connected'. Also add comma placement and remove filler words.

× I don't have to, uh, bring umbrella, uh, during the rainy day, uh, also the office is really uh.

✓ I don't have to bring an umbrella on rainy days, and the office is really comfortable.

Use indefinite article 'an' before a singular count noun 'umbrella'. Use 'on rainy days' (general habit) rather than 'during the rainy day'. Combine clauses with 'and'. Added adjective 'comfortable' to complete the sentence.

× I satisfied with a present building because the building quite new and, uh, innovative.

✓ I am satisfied with the present building because the building is quite new and innovative.

Missing verb 'am' after 'I' and definite article 'the' before 'present building' when referring to a specific building. Add 'is' before adjectives.

× So I, I don't want to work any place because it's very comfortable place to.

✓ So I don't want to work anywhere else because it's a very comfortable place.

Use 'anywhere else' for other locations, include article 'a' before 'very comfortable place', and remove redundant trailing 'to'. Also avoid repetition 'I, I'.

× I don't have any uh, future plans. However my work contract is uh, finished next year.

✓ I don't have any future plans. However, my work contract finishes next year.

Use present simple 'finishes' to state scheduled future events. Remove filler words and add comma after 'However'.

× I have to plan uh, plan move to new company.

✓ I have to plan to move to a new company.

Correct verb pattern: 'plan to move' is the right structure. Include article 'a' before 'new company' and remove duplicate 'plan'.

× I was I.

✓ (This sentence is unclear; possible correction: 'I was thinking about it.' or 'I was going to.' )

The fragment 'I was I.' is incomplete and ungrammatical. Provide a full clause depending on intended meaning, such as 'I was thinking about it.' or 'I was going to.'