工作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答要更自然并直接。可以说“I’m a psychology student”并补充一句说明，例如你在哪个年级或哪所学校，这样更具体且信息量更大。注意句子不要太长，最多五句。

示例: I’m a psychology student at XYZ University, currently in my second year. I’m particularly interested in cognitive psychology, which I hope to study more deeply.

建议: 句子表达混乱且有语法错误。直接且简洁地回答“我没有工作，我是全日制学生”并可补充一个原因。避免使用不相关或错误的词汇。

示例: I don’t have a job at the moment because I’m a full-time student. I focus on my studies and part-time internships when needed.

建议: 回答不清晰且语法错误较多。先明确陈述观点，例如“Yes, I think the university is a good place to work for students.”然后用一到两句具体理由支持，比如安静、资源丰富或老师支持。注意主谓一致和用词准确。

示例: Yes, I think the university is a good place to work for students because it offers quiet study spaces and access to academic resources. Professors are also supportive, which helps with learning.

建议: 表达不自然且有很多措辞错误。可以直接说“Yes, I like it because it’s quiet and helps me concentrate.”再给出具体例子，如图书馆或安静的自习室如何帮助学习。避免不必要或不相关的词汇。

示例: Yes, I like it because it’s very quiet and helps me concentrate. For example, I usually study in the library where I can focus on exam preparation without distractions.

建议: 答案不明确且语法错误严重。需要明确具体职业目标并说明原因和如何实现。比如想成为法医心理学家或在警察部门做心理顾问，并解释动机和计划。

示例: After graduation, I’d like to work as a forensic psychologist or as a psychologist within a police department because I want to help victims and contribute to criminal investigations. To prepare, I plan to do internships and pursue a master’s degree in forensic psychology.

× I'm a student from psychology program.

✓ I'm a student in the psychology program.

原句中介词和冠词使用不当，且省略了限定词。应使用介词 in 表示“在……（项目/课程）中”，并在 psychology program 前加定冠词 the 或限定词 a（若指某一特定项目用 the）。建议：使用固定搭配 "in the program" 或 "in a program"。

× Sorry I didn't have to work, I heard I'm still a student and I didn't have apartheid or freelance so I don't have the right place.

✓ Sorry, I don't have a job; I'm still a student, and I don't work as an employee or a freelancer, so I don't have a workplace.

原句中使用了错误的动词及词汇（didn't have to work 意为“不需要工作”，而不是“没有工作”），并且 apartheid 用词完全不合适，应为 employee 或 employed。时态也不一致，应使用一般现在时描述当前状况。建议：用 "I don't have a job" 或 "I'm not employed"，并用 "employee or freelancer" 表达受雇或自由职业者。

× I didn't have a jar but I think university is a good place to work for my study because it have a good attention and attitude on the lecture lesson.

✓ I don't have a job, but I think the university is a good place to study because it gives good attention and support to the lectures.

句子时态混乱以及词汇使用错误：didn't have a jar 应为 don't have a job；主语 university 为第三人称单数，动词要用 gives（原句用 have 错误），attention 和 attitude 用法不当，应改为 attention/support to the lectures。建议：保持现在时描述事实，注意主谓一致并使用恰当名词搭配。

× Yes, I will waited because it is so quiet so it can let me keep extensions and more focus on my job and to study the examination and remittance tabs.

✓ Yes, I will wait because it is so quiet that it allows me to keep focus on my work and study for exams.

原句中 will waited 时态混用（将来助动词后应接动词原形），且 can let 表达不自然，应改为 allows。其他词组如 keep extensions、remittance tabs 无意义，应改为 keep focus、study for exams。建议：will 后接原形动词，使用 allow/let 时注意搭配，并用常见短语表达意图。

× As a psychology student, I would like to do a police because I want to have others so.

✓ As a psychology student, I would like to become a police officer because I want to help others.

原句中 do a police 用法错误，正确表达为 become a police officer；句尾 want to have others so 毫无意义，应为 want to help others。动词搭配和词汇选择不当。建议：使用 become + 职业，表目的时常用 want to + 动词原形（help）。