工作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达不够清晰，语法和词汇使用有误，建议简洁明了地介绍自己是学生，专业是什么，并简要说明兴趣。

示例: Yes, I am a student at a university, majoring in history. I am particularly interested in Chinese history and how historical events have influenced social development.

建议: 回答不够连贯且含糊，建议直接说明目前没有工作，并简要描述偶尔帮老师做的事情，使用连词使句子更流畅。

示例: Actually, I am still a student and do not have a full-time job. However, sometimes I help my teacher in the laboratory by organizing books and cleaning.

建议: 表达不够准确，建议明确说明工作环境的优点，并用连词连接句子，使表达更自然。

示例: Yes, it is a good place to work because I can read new books during my free time, and sometimes my teacher gives me helpful advice.

建议: 回答内容混乱且语法错误较多，建议清晰表达对工作的感受，说明原因，并避免无关内容。

示例: I don't like the place very much because the work is busy and sometimes boring. Also, my supervisor often reminds me that I am the last to finish my tasks, which makes me feel stressed.

建议: 回答表达不够流畅，建议分清楚学习和工作计划，使用连词连接句子，并准确表达旅行目的。

示例: First, I plan to complete my history studies at university. Then, I want to travel to rural areas to learn more about their historical background.

× Yeah, I'm a student in 19 no more university and my major is history, which are learning about Chinese history and the government history in the parts and I enjoying loving about how the historical you want to fax the social development developing.

✓ Yeah, I'm a student at 19 No More University and my major is history, which is about learning Chinese history and government history, and I enjoy learning about how history affects social development.

句子中“which are learning”中的“are”与单数先行词“history”不一致，应使用单数“is”。此外，“I enjoying loving”结构错误，应改为“I enjoy”。这是单复数不一致的问题，需保持主语和谓语的一致性。

× Yeah, I'm a student in 19 no more university and my major is history, which are learning about Chinese history and the government history in the parts and I enjoying loving about how the historical you want to fax the social development developing.

✓ Yeah, I'm a student at 19 No More University and my major is history, which is about learning Chinese history and government history, and I enjoy learning about how history affects social development.

介词“in”用于表示地点时，通常用于较小的空间或城市，大学前应使用“at”。此外，“in the parts”表达不清，应删除或改为更合适的表达。

× ...and I enjoying loving about how the historical you want to fax the social development developing.

✓ ...and I enjoy learning about how history affects social development.

动词“enjoy”后应接动名词形式，正确表达为“I enjoy learning”。“enjoying loving”结构错误，需简化为“I enjoy”。

× Actually, now I'm still then, so I don't have a job and I don't have a place where I can walk in sometimes part when I pray, I always do some, uh, some work in the laborat to have my teacher and to clean the book shave.

✓ Actually, now I'm still a student, so I don't have a job and I don't have a place where I can work. Sometimes when I pray, I always do some work in the laboratory to help my teacher and to clean the bookshelves.

句中“walk in sometimes part when I pray”表达混乱，应为“work”。“laborat”应为“laboratory”。时态应保持现在时，表达习惯动作。

× ...some work in the laborat to have my teacher and to clean the book shave.

✓ ...some work in the laboratory to help my teacher and to clean the bookshelves.

介词“to have my teacher”不合适，应为“to help my teacher”。“book shave”应为“bookshelves”，这是词汇错误。

× Actually I sent in a day is a pretty good place to work and I can rate some a new books when I have a free time and sometimes I can get some faith from my teacher.

✓ Actually, the lab is a pretty good place to work and I can read some new books when I have free time, and sometimes I can get some help from my teacher.

“sent in a day”不合适，应为“the lab”。“rate some a new books”应为“read some new books”。“faith”应为“help”。单复数和词汇使用错误。

× Actually I like a little because I think my work is busy and I need to undo lots of work and I feel boring sometimes.

✓ Actually, I like it a little because I think my work is busy and I need to do lots of work, and I feel bored sometimes.

“like a little”应为“like it a little”。“undo lots of work”应为“do lots of work”。“feel boring”应为“feel bored”，形容词用法错误。

× My balls will then call me in every time and he said me I'm the last one to handled my paper and I will feel very this parents.

✓ My boss calls me every time and he tells me I'm the last one to handle my papers, and I feel very disappointed.

“balls”应为“boss”。“he said me”应为“he tells me”。“handled”应为“handle”。“this parents”表达错误，应为“disappointed”。代词和词汇使用错误。

× My balls will then call me in every time and he said me I'm the last one to handled my paper and I will feel very this parents.

✓ My boss calls me every time and he tells me I'm the last one to handle my papers, and I feel very disappointed.

“said”应为“tells”，因为是习惯动作，使用一般现在时。动词“handled”应为原形“handle”，因为是情态动词后接动词原形。

× OK I think 1st I have a pretty plan in my study and firstly I will finish my history class in my university. Secondly I will try to go to a travel and to travel more countryside countries to know how tall are in history.

✓ OK, I think first I have a clear plan for my study. Firstly, I will finish my history classes at my university. Secondly, I will try to travel more to countryside areas to learn about their history.

“go to a travel”错误，应为“travel”。“countryside countries”应为“countryside areas”。“how tall are in history”表达不清，应为“learn about their history”。未来时态使用正确，但词汇和表达需改正。