Plants— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you keep plants at home?

Thí sinh

Yes, I keep some plants at home. They make my plants look nicer and help clean the air. I also like growing habits because I can use them when I cook.

Giám khảo

What plant did you grow when you were young?

Thí sinh

Well, when I was young, I grow sunflowers in my backyard. They were easy to take care of and grow quickly which made it fun for me to watch a guitar.

Giám khảo

Do you know anything about growing a plant?

Thí sinh

Yes, I know a bit about growing plants. I have a small garden at home. Well, I grow some herbs and flowers. My parents taught me the bicycles like how much water and the sunlight they need.

Giám khảo

Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?

Thí sinh

Yes, Chinese people do give parents as gifts. They are seen as a symbol of life and a growth. So they make meaningful gifts. People often give lamb floor homewarming or when someone opens a new business plant like a babole.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Do you keep plants at home?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答切题,也给出了养植物的原因,但“make my plants look nicer”表达重复,“growing habits”应改成具体植物或“herbs”。建议直接说明家里养什么植物,并用一个具体例子补充用途。

Ví dụ: Yes, I keep a few plants at home, mainly herbs and small flowers. They make my living room look brighter, and I can use fresh basil in my cooking.

What plant did you grow when you were young?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答提到了向日葵和种植体验,但过去经历应使用过去时“grew”;“watch a guitar”与语境不符,可能需要改成“watch them grow”。建议补充一个具体观察或感受,并用连接词串联原因。

Ví dụ: When I was young, I grew sunflowers in our backyard. They were easy to look after, and they grew quite quickly, so I enjoyed watching them get taller and bloom.

Do you know anything about growing a plant?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 回答有直接回应,也提到了自己的经验,但“the bicycles”意思不清;最后一句可改为“the basics, such as how much water and sunlight plants need”。建议合并重复信息,并举例说明一种植物的照料方法。

Ví dụ: Yes, I know a little about it because I grow herbs and flowers in a small garden. My parents taught me the basics, such as how much water and sunlight plants need. For example, I water my herbs regularly but make sure the soil isn’t too wet.

Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达了植物礼物的象征意义,也提到了赠送场合,但“give parents”应为“give plants”,“a growth”应为“growth”;最后一句有多处词语不清。建议明确说明送什么植物、送给谁以及常见场合,并控制在三至四句。

Ví dụ: Yes, plants are quite popular gifts in China. They can symbolize growth and good fortune, so people often give them for housewarmings or when someone opens a new business. For example, a small money tree is a popular choice.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× Well, when I was young, I grow sunflowers in my backyard.

✓ Well, when I was young, I grew sunflowers in my backyard.

句子描述的是过去发生的事情,且有“when I was young”明确表示过去,因此动词“grow”应使用过去式“grew”。

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× They were easy to take care of and grow quickly which made it fun for me to watch a guitar.

✓ They were easy to take care of, and they grew quickly, which made it fun for me to watch a guitar.

这句话是在讲小时候种向日葵的经历,动词应使用过去时。“grow”应改为“grew”。为使两个并列分句的主语和结构更清楚,补充了“they”。

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× My parents taught me the bicycles like how much water and the sunlight they need.

✓ My parents taught me things like how much water and sunlight plants need.

“taught me the bicycles like how much...”中,“the bicycles”无法与后面的内容构成通顺的句子结构。可用“things like”引出所学的知识;“how much water and sunlight plants need”则是完整的间接疑问结构。这里的“bicycles”本身也可能是识别或用词错误,建议确认原本想表达的内容。

22: Article errors(冠词错误)

× They are seen as a symbol of life and a growth.

✓ They are seen as a symbol of life and growth.

这里的“growth”表示一般意义上的“成长、发展”,是不可数名词,通常不与不定冠词“a”连用,因此应删除第二个“a”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Clean— Blank; Pure; Virtuous; Neat
Easy— Uncomplicated; Docile; Vulnerable; Leisurely
Fun— Merriment; Ridicule; Enjoyable; Playful; Tease
New— Recently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
Small— Little; Short; Slight; Inadequate; Foolish
Young— Youthful; Immature; Fledgling; Offspring; Young people
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